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Post by HF on Apr 26, 2017 8:39:43 GMT -5
Awesome! Machine gun is two words, and it ought to be "this will definitely come into great use" instead of "this would." Now let's see how he installs his own parts. XD Thanks, and fixed! Are typos and spelling/grammar the only way I can get you to comment these days? :v
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Post by Dashe on Apr 26, 2017 13:21:22 GMT -5
Awesome! Machine gun is two words, and it ought to be "this will definitely come into great use" instead of "this would." Now let's see how he installs his own parts. XD Thanks, and fixed! Are typos and spelling/grammar the only way I can get you to comment these days? :vTypos, spelling/grammar, and Bonnes. I've got way too much on my plate for one person these days.
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Post by Mikéy on Apr 28, 2017 21:47:10 GMT -5
I only wish I could give the kind of feedback that you're looking for. It's all great to me. xD
Usually the grammar gets corrected before I can notice, or it's passable enough to where I simply don't notice; and I'm certainly no artistic adviser.
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Post by HF on May 9, 2017 7:35:07 GMT -5
Typos, spelling/grammar, and Bonnes. I've got way too much on my plate for one person these days. I'm working on the latter! :v Update: New page is up! Get equipped (again)! Also as promised the glossary has been updated. Happy now, MegaTuga?
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Post by MegaTuga on May 9, 2017 11:50:02 GMT -5
Also as promised the glossary has been updated. Happy now, MegaTuga ?Nnngh... Lore knowledge feels amazing... uh. What was I doing again? Oh right. i'm not sure if I would trust my body with such an unknown object as that but hey. If Rock doesn't mind I guess it's fine. It's a pretty neat concept. I didn't think much of the relation to MMZX's Biometal mainly because Carbons and Humanoids might be different biologically (Humanoids being more towards the "android" side) but I can see how it can work. I'm assuming they use the same slab for every weapon?
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Post by HF on May 9, 2017 20:35:48 GMT -5
Nnngh... Lore knowledge feels amazing... uh. What was I doing again? Oh right. Addict. :v The Biomatter slab shown acts as a catalyst that allows Rock to take in new weapons and equipment while in armor (or unbind, which would be necessary to allow Roll to work on maintaining/upgrading them). As such, weapons cannot be summoned up unless Rock is in that armor (and exclusively him).
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Digouter
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Who ate my crackerrrs...
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Post by Digouter on May 12, 2017 11:52:23 GMT -5
Hey you~ Hahah, sorry it's been such a long time since I've said anything about your ongoing project... I guess I've been feeling rather out of it > w >. Still though! I wanna make it up to you. I appreciate how hard you've been working on this project, and that sometimes motivation feels like worlds away haha. Maaaany years ago when I was posting on this forum, I got it into my head that I wanted to draw Rock, Roll and Tron in a kind of realistic way. I guess I did manage to draw them and got a good amount of praise, but I thought I'd try again, as a way to say thank you for working so hard .' This is for you haha. I really love your work, and I'll post reviews soon .
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Post by HF on May 16, 2017 7:47:21 GMT -5
Hey you~ Hahah, sorry it's been such a long time since I've said anything about your ongoing project... I guess I've been feeling rather out of it > w >. Still though! I wanna make it up to you. I appreciate how hard you've been working on this project, and that sometimes motivation feels like worlds away haha. Maaaany years ago when I was posting on this forum, I got it into my head that I wanted to draw Rock, Roll and Tron in a kind of realistic way. I guess I did manage to draw them and got a good amount of praise, but I thought I'd try again, as a way to say thank you for working so hard .' This is for you haha. I really love your work, and I'll post reviews soon . Thanks for the piece you drew! It reminds me a lot of the realistic yet fictional style used by Urasawa (Pluto, Monster, 20th Century Boys) especially with the rounder and subtle facial features from his experiences living in Europe. Alright then! Just for that... Update: Anyone called for a weekly update this time?
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Post by Dashe on May 16, 2017 14:28:44 GMT -5
Oh wait, is it Resident Evil? I don't actually play it, but I know they have police. I mean, I really just commented to say your link just puts you back in this thread.
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Post by HF on May 16, 2017 20:02:09 GMT -5
I mean, I really just commented to say your link just puts you back in this thread. Fixed now. Thanks for pointing out.
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Post by HF on May 23, 2017 18:10:17 GMT -5
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Post by Dashe on May 23, 2017 21:36:28 GMT -5
Awesome, we're getting from point A to point B a little faster! Good going!
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Post by ShadyRounds on May 24, 2017 23:17:32 GMT -5
Eleven days is better than I could do literally anything (Shamelessly replies to an old post). Also, I'll give whatever feedback I can come up with, but I'm wagering I won't have much, I just like to read comics. I don't even know how one critiques a perfect form of media such as a comic, I just know how to digest them. Can comics even have "spelling errors"? I thought that was garnish.
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Post by Dashe on May 25, 2017 0:31:30 GMT -5
Eleven days is better than I could do literally anything (Shamelessly replies to an old post). Also, I'll give whatever feedback I can come up with, but I'm wagering I won't have much, I just like to read comics. I don't even know how one critiques a perfect form of media such as a comic, I just know how to digest them. Can comics even have "spelling errors"? I thought that was garnish. Of course they can have spelling errors. Seriously, you've got to stop eating spelling errors, Shady. They've got trans fats. Anyway, what I like about RMDL is that HF tends to go off-book, so if you've played Legends 1 dozens of times, half of critiquing it involves jumping up and down and going, "That's different! Finally, we get to see something new!"
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Post by HF on May 25, 2017 7:49:47 GMT -5
Eleven days is better than I could do literally anything (Shamelessly replies to an old post). Also, I'll give whatever feedback I can come up with, but I'm wagering I won't have much, I just like to read comics. I don't even know how one critiques a perfect form of media such as a comic, I just know how to digest them. Can comics even have "spelling errors"? I thought that was garnish. What I like about RMDL is that HF tends to go off-book, so if you've played Legends 1 dozens of times, half of critiquing it involves jumping up and down and going, "That's different! Finally, we get to see something new!" As a passive medium, I feel I can add so much more to an interpretation of the story; in addition to personal inspirations and crossover content (that I hope adds to the world building elements while maintaining focus), I aim to add some of the "left in development" content and any stuff that exists in some form but is not part of the original release for whatever reason (even the bombs from the infamous bootleg game was worked in because it amused me). As arrogant as it may sound, a sort of "Complete Take" is what I want to aim for. Also because it bears repeating: #1 rule of the writing is absolutely no narrative-significant OCs (cameos, original mechanical designs, modifications, etc. are free game however).
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