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Post by HF on Feb 28, 2017 6:46:29 GMT -5
Good stuff though! Let's see if Roll stays behind to hide in the car. Well, let's see if this next page answers anything! Update: New page is up! After some consideration, we're not going to Roll with the aforementioned status quo!
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Post by MegaTuga on Feb 28, 2017 17:10:26 GMT -5
We never batted an eye at this moment in the game. Barrell just lets his only(?) granddaughter go within range of pirates' weaponry. Later we find out that the Support Car is pretty much invincible so there was no need to fear... except when she runs over Rock over and over...
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Post by Mikéy on Feb 28, 2017 17:13:42 GMT -5
I kinda expect Roll to drive circles around Leopordos coming up. While shooting them at the same time.
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Post by Avegodro on Mar 1, 2017 10:27:10 GMT -5
I hope the Bonne's are ready for a demolition derby, Rock & Roll are going to leave them a hefty repair bill.
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Post by Dashe on Mar 3, 2017 2:07:25 GMT -5
I'm just sitting here wondering when we get to see Bon. We got 2/3 of the trio out there, just one to go!
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Digouter
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Who ate my crackerrrs...
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Post by Digouter on Mar 3, 2017 9:13:46 GMT -5
I'm sorry this took so long HF! I've been looking forward to the next chapter for quite a while so I'm going to write down my thoughts while I read it!
Though before that, just wanted to reply to what you were saying haha. I'm glad I'm not the only one who got anxiety during the crash landing sequence... and yeah, having Rock in his casual wear makes sense. Happy you cleared that up for me too, it's nice to know the ins and outs because I get to appreciate it more. I very much agree with the -fun- you wish to have = w =.
What is this "Boku" :^)... and well, I did always have smexy googles~
Seems like such a stigma, if even an "Outer's Child" gets... well, outed! But again, completely understandable. Thanks for explaining your reasons behind it again as always, much appreciated!
So okay... here we go!
CHAPTER 2: FIRST STRIKE!
I love how Rock looks so bored when he's not shooting things haha. Things are definitely switching into high gear (also, I love the vendo art)! I want to comment on the Kattelox police and cars... well, maybe just the former because the latter gives me the urge to jump on them (any vehicle really). You emote'em well despite their eyes shadowed out! Your vehicle drawings are great! And as always, the action scenes 'blow' me away. Get it? Explosions and... well, let's continue...
Poor Servbot 39 haha! I also see another cool advantage of Rock not always being in his armor here... I love that safety hat. There's a similar cameo in my story as Ashlynn's personal hard hat = w =. What kind of police are these - letting kids handle grenades haha!
This is already an excellent re-telling of the Blumebear battle. I was just waiting for one of those fellas to be 'mine' :B. 2-15... 39's face is the best haha. Hrrrrrnnnn, that cop reminds me of somebody...
Also, Tron is looking fierce as well! It is a little strange not seeing her iconic hairstyle but now that I think about it... that iconic hairstyle is even stranger haha. She is also holding a gun . w .;, I suppose pirates must have guns if they're going to be holding people hostage! ...cute butt too
Volnutt.exe! Hahah, what a cool scene to end it with. Rock's quiiite intimidating... and then the extra scene just disarms him. = w = Neat-o helmeted art too!
Sorry, I pretty much said waaaay too much, but I thought I'd do a page-by-page review haha. Well, this was exciting from start to finish! Thank you for this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (seriously though, good job on the vehicles)
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Post by HF on Mar 7, 2017 10:08:02 GMT -5
Dashe : Bon's fight is coming between now and the fight in Clozer Woods. Just thought I'd confirm again for clarity. Sorry for the late reply Digouter ! Been distracted with some stuff (pronounced "Switch"), but thanks again for your response! Recognize the vendor art from another certain Capcom IP...? You're right, I really like to have Rock outside of his armor and not follow the "his body is a bunch of mechanical prosthetics" direction that the artbook portrays (I rather think of it as a visual guide rather than an in-universe thing). Also it lets him emote better in non-combat situations. Also that helmet, it wouldn't be the first such case...
Keeping with the German motif (a.k.a. the one with the best science in the world™) I went with for the Bonnes, Tron's handgun is a Luger pistol which first originated and started service in Germany. Didn't want to give her anything too heavy as I want to keep emphasis on her strengths as a commander and highly skilled pilot. Once again, thanks for the feedback! Update: New page is now up! Featuring quick early pre-MML2 cameo (?)! Anyway, Switch's been a massive distraction. Going to have to hurry with next page's Artwork...
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Post by HF on Mar 14, 2017 7:15:55 GMT -5
Update: New page is up!
All this new Artwork is time-consuming...
Also I am running terribly low on sleep just to get this page out, so possibility of taking a short break before the next pages are ready for release. Thanks for everyone's understanding!
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Post by MegaTuga on Mar 14, 2017 16:23:07 GMT -5
I'm just going to say this: *ahem* RKO OUTTA NOWHERE!
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Post by HF on Apr 11, 2017 11:07:09 GMT -5
Update: New page is here! (And about damn time, right?) I wonder what Roll has in store for Rock this time...
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Post by MegaTuga on Apr 12, 2017 13:39:46 GMT -5
All that buildup! For the Splash mine I bet.
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Post by HF on Apr 25, 2017 7:15:38 GMT -5
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Post by MegaTuga on Apr 25, 2017 10:10:41 GMT -5
"LandBird" "BioMatter slab" I except a glossary update HF! SO yeah. Completely forgot that you can get the Machine Buster at this point from scraps of the Blumbears.
Also I see that you deviated from the "replaceable body parts" which are what most people think happens, for some sort of organic and artificial bond with weapons. I dig it!
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Post by HF on Apr 25, 2017 10:31:31 GMT -5
"LandBird" "BioMatter slab" I except a glossary update HF! SO yeah. Completely forgot that you can get the Machine Buster at this point from scraps of the Blumbears. Yeah, I'll "unlock" those parts of the glossary for the next update! To put it simply, the former's pretty much the equivalent of Full Metal Jacket rounds for piercing damage. The Biomatter, on the other hand... take a wild guess! At least in Rock's case (so far), which makes him and his armor special. Unlike the other characters, Rock is the only one who is shown to have both a full flesh body and an armored one, though on a petty level it's just an excuse to put him in naked situations because it's funny (also fanservice). Bionics and mechanical prosthetic limbs still exist, of course. It's the extent of how they can be applied that's worth discussing especially given what we know.
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Post by Dashe on Apr 25, 2017 12:11:08 GMT -5
Awesome!
Machine gun is two words, and it ought to be "this will definitely come into great use" instead of "this would." Now let's see how he installs his own parts. XD
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