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Post by MegaTuga on Feb 6, 2013 8:00:05 GMT -5
So you are making Rock's equipment more unique than that of the general digger eh? that's a surprise. I know that Roll is a genius but having her to be a super-duper-genius to make all of that unique stuff is... I don't know.. a little bit too much? At least the Junk Store Man recognizes the Buster as being expensive but if Roll made it then did she inspired in those models? I can see why it would be more expensive: it has more risks because instead of being attached to your arm it is almost inside your hand so in case of sudden overload or something among those lines it could be dangerous.
... Speaking of that are you going to keep here the Digger Class license as well? I can see how only diggers of an higher class would have previlege to buy more unique equipment since the rank would determine their experience.
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Post by Dashe on Feb 6, 2013 15:36:53 GMT -5
These corrections are little things, but still not quite grammatically solid.
For the first correction, in the context of the sentence, "but" and "yet" mean roughly the same thing, so you'd only use one to avoid redundancy (which is something you'd especially want to avoid in an action scene). I thought "yet" fit better considering the content of the next speech bubble.
For the second, you've used "could" as a present tense verb. The only time "could" is used in the present tense is in a question like "Could you pick up some milk on the way home?" Otherwise, for a present-tense situation like the one you have, you'd want to use "can."
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Post by HF on Feb 10, 2013 19:06:04 GMT -5
Whoo! Domain transfer's a success. From some personal testing, everything's not only working perfectly (or even better with the existing code), the pages seem to be loading faster. Dashe: Yeah, alright then. I'll have a look later and see what I'll do. MegaTuga: I've got my ideas for Roll's relationship with her inventions, so we'll see! Iwould personally like to bring these things up though; at least elaborate a bit on it in-story and not just in the files/encyclopedia. As for the other stuff, I've got my ideas on how to work them into the story (though it'll probably take a while before I actually get to the point they become important enough to mention). Edit: Dashe: Alright, rephrased the latest page and made the suggested changes. Thanks again!
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Post by HF on Feb 13, 2013 1:46:50 GMT -5
Finally, RMDL's Facebook page is now live along with the twitter feed! Current plan for these two is to post site updates on them (in addition to the usual updates and Q&A on this thread, of course). Main Site will be updated with their links soon.
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Post by Mikéy on Feb 13, 2013 2:16:40 GMT -5
Wow, first like! Good to see you've decided to make it a reality, HF! I'll probably start following the Twitter on my incredibly-obscure-twitter-account-on-which-i-never-tweet-stuffs-and-look-like-a-stalker thingamabob tomorrow. Rock on.
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Post by Rockman Striker on Feb 13, 2013 23:05:30 GMT -5
I'm your second like! (Also the third considering I liked it as The Master System too but it seems Facebook recognizes me as a single person) I love your portrait image by the way.
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EX
Zakobon
Ever thought how awesome it'd be if all Mega Mans were in the same room?
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Post by EX on Feb 14, 2013 6:46:39 GMT -5
chapter 1 page 17- I'M IN SUSPENSE! I really can't wait for the next page~ maybe I should've spreaded certain amounts of pages per days to keep me busy 0.0;
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Post by HF on Feb 14, 2013 17:58:31 GMT -5
Thanks Mikey and Rockman Striker! EX: You could try taking the cameo challenge in the meantime... I've finished making adjustments and bug fixes, and added the Facebook/Twitter buttons (will probably review them a bit later and add better ones later, suggestions are welcome).
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Ever thought how awesome it'd be if all Mega Mans were in the same room?
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Post by EX on Feb 14, 2013 18:16:04 GMT -5
Oh what's your twitter?
And as for the cameo challenge, I'll take a look at it and give it a whirl, thanks for the suggestion!
Edit: Can I have a hint? Like how many cameos there are?
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Post by HF on Feb 19, 2013 6:57:53 GMT -5
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Post by Loken on Feb 19, 2013 17:21:49 GMT -5
Aww yeah! LIFTER ACTION!!! If only the lifter could be gamesharked into MML1 .Junkman is extremely impressed, I wouldn't be surprised if he gave Rock everything he ever owned and not just a rusty old car and some dinky mine parts. Amelia might as well step down as mayor, there's a new sheriff in town.
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Post by HF on Feb 19, 2013 20:19:48 GMT -5
Either my browser is doing something wrong or the RSS/Twitter/Facebook button trio on the top of the page are indeed under each other in a weird way. Oh yay, more troubleshooting! Tried testing the site on Dolphin (Android OS), Firefox, Internet Explorer, and Chrome on a few machines.; I'm not getting the problem though (try Ctrl+F5 to refresh your cache). Sure. I'll give the split one a try; at least until I get more then I might have to shuffle the front page around a bit. And yeah, I'll fix up Roll a bit later. I don't get what you mean. Could you please explain a bit more? I like to tease. Oh? Well you've gotten my attention there. I've been experimenting around with tags to allow thumbnails to appear when posting links on facebook and other social networking sites. So far, I've gotten FB to recognize the uploads so that's good. Others like Reddit, on the other hand, I've been having trouble with (been a hit/miss at times). Up to now I don't have much clue regarding what makes the image thumbnail appear without linking the page itself (bad practice that way). Aww yeah! LIFTER ACTION!!! If only the lifter could be gamesharked into MML1 .Junkman is extremely impressed, I wouldn't be surprised if he gave Rock everything he ever owned and not just a rusty old car and some dinky mine parts. Amelia might as well step down as mayor, there's a new sheriff in town. Now there, he's still got a town to save a bit later on...
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Post by HF on Feb 19, 2013 23:02:38 GMT -5
I thought the same thing as well; the idea at the time I made the changes was to give the Facebook and twitter links a bit more exposure; in hindsight, it probably wasn't too necessary given the links are already in the header. But thanks to your suggestion, I can probably trim things down better. Ah, okay. I'll have a look at that when I have time later in the week. I see. So the method isn't useful only for social networking sites... Once the Junk Man is mass produced, the Air Pirates (or lack thereof) will be finished in no time!
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Post by MegaTuga on Feb 20, 2013 6:56:38 GMT -5
Just give Rock a proper Indiana Jones hat because he already has a whip... ... no applause? man, tough public... XD
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Post by HF on Feb 21, 2013 23:19:49 GMT -5
@truner: Found out the problem (or lack thereof) and fixed the thumbnails you mentioned. Thanks for telling me about Quick Dial. As for Mayor Amelia, I think it's a requirement for all leaders to have a good set of statistics to match their authority. MegaTuga: I believe he's going to go through lots of whips and hats because he's so reckless with, well, everything.
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