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Post by HF on Apr 17, 2012 11:56:33 GMT -5
@ Dashe: (We discussed this before, but anyway) Well I want to expand on this 'project' as much as I can. But I believe giving myself an extra week in between should give me a chance to do both (or switch when appropriate, whichever I feel works best).
Well, speaking of the schedule change...
Update: Thanks to Easter break from last time, I decided to push the schedule change to start this week. Enjoy the new page, everyone!
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Post by MegaTuga on Apr 17, 2012 15:12:40 GMT -5
I actually share the same opinions as Dashe, although it's entirely up to you.
Regardless I must say I liked this page mostly because it started to deviate from the original story... yeah I always thought it was strange for them to only have one map on the deck (I checked it from pretty much every angle they gave to us the the cut scenes and there aren't any other ones), so this makes sense.
Also Data being the one suggesting it even further aims to a better story because I always thought Data was in full knowledge of everything from the very start (might I say he was the one causing the engine to go kaput? eh? eh? *wink*)
Another thing that made me question to myself was the fact that the island is not on their map (again it's funny how completely opposite to the original it is) because Kattleox seems to be an island filled with history and possible tourism after all. But I'm just speculating here, your version might be different.
P.S- Now this might be silly but I loved that little detail of a rope in the deck of the Flutter. I'm not sure why, I just like it.
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It's perfect to hang the laundry! XD
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Post by HF on Apr 19, 2012 1:42:23 GMT -5
@ MegaTuga: I don't remember the rope even being there in the game, but it adds to the entire "sailboat" feel of the series despite all the crazy technology seen here and there.
Laundry? But of course!
@ Truner: I'm playing with the way I present speech for a bit; but should get one I feel comfortable with through each iteration. And hey, if I have to tell you how to read it (beyond the basic right-left order), I would have failed as the author wouldn't I?
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Post by Loken on Apr 19, 2012 17:45:46 GMT -5
Very nice touch with data directing them to mysterious uncharted island! Some nice foreshadowing there. Also I like gramps.  |
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Post by HF on May 1, 2012 10:01:55 GMT -5
Update: New page's up, along with a few content updates!
Also, the promised Glossary has been established!
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Post by Loken on May 1, 2012 19:50:46 GMT -5
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Post by SketchMan3 on May 1, 2012 21:03:53 GMT -5
Wow, I didn't expect Data's first appearance to be so... lifeless. But still, it's a good page. I can't wait until they land on the island!
It's like reading the Sunday comics =D
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Post by SketchMan3 on May 2, 2012 12:07:17 GMT -5
Ah, the eyes. That's it. I actually think it's appropriate to have a frontal introduction, given his role in the game, and his body shape in general. It's just the eyes for me.
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Post by Mikéy on May 2, 2012 16:10:57 GMT -5
Data's eyes are the pizza and someone took a slice out. I don't think it looks that bad, but hey. He's a robot monkey. He's supposed to be stiff. To Kattelox! |
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Post by Loken on May 2, 2012 17:36:21 GMT -5
Also if you look at the panel where data says 'Trust me Rock.' Data looks like a butt. It cannot be unseen  |
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Post by Mikéy on May 2, 2012 21:29:54 GMT -5
OH-KAY- So Data's ears are huge, his eyes are tiny, and at a good enough angle with support from a speech bubble, Data looks like an ass.
*claps hands*
I think we should move on now. :41:
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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2012 12:36:04 GMT -5
I'm happy to see that the profiles had been updated. I also like Barrel and Data's introductions.
Like Dashe said, it's best to stay ahead of schedule as you can. Sometimes real-life can get so hectic that you might not have time for other things that you were planned on doing.
Looking forward to the next page.
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Post by HF on May 8, 2012 8:43:58 GMT -5
@ Data-ass comments: I really don't see it...
@ Steffie: I try.
Update: I'm feeling eager to put up a new page this week, so there you go!
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Post by SketchMan3 on May 8, 2012 9:29:42 GMT -5
Argh! Nice page. The suspense is killing me.
I'll say this, the small eyes do give data a more "simian" appearance, so that's cool.
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Post by HF on May 13, 2012 20:58:23 GMT -5
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