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Post by HF on Jun 10, 2014 9:31:49 GMT -5
Kyle: You've successfully encouraged it, and you know it! Update: So much for my couple of days from work; didn't manage to work on additional contents as I have hoped unfortunately. But as usual, the next page's up!
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Post by Dashe on Jun 10, 2014 10:22:09 GMT -5
Got a grammar fix for ya--the first bubble should be "You're" instead of "You've."
I think I'll start printing Chapter 2 out when it hits 10 pages. Those report covers only hold so many of them, after all.
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Post by HF on Jun 10, 2014 10:34:29 GMT -5
Got a grammar fix for ya--the first bubble should be "You're" instead of "You've." How careless of me! Thanks as always! (How many pages since the last "accident" does this make it? ) Cool. Mind if you share a photo of the compiled printout with us once it's there*? I'm curious to know how it turns out! * And I'll make sure it will!
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Post by Dashe on Jun 10, 2014 11:22:03 GMT -5
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Post by HF on Jun 10, 2014 20:13:48 GMT -5
Dashe: Looking great! Makes me interested in compiling an illustrated volume book cover for it... Edit: By the way, would you mind if I share them (and any more you may have) on the site in between the next update?
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Post by Kyle on Jun 11, 2014 15:16:04 GMT -5
You've successfully encouraged it, and you know it! Am I supposed to feel like I've accomplished something? Because I don't.
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Post by HF on Jun 19, 2014 10:23:15 GMT -5
Kyle: Well, I'm sure someone's going to bring it up later when Winter comes along. New Content: Finally gotten around to cleaning the character profiles up a bit, including a group profile for the Kattelox Police! Lengthy over-analysis is over-analyzed.
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Post by HF on Jun 24, 2014 9:34:39 GMT -5
Update: New page's up, and then some! Finally gotten around to updating the Encyclopedia section as well along with a new glossary entry. Please tell me what you all think!
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Post by Dashe on Jun 24, 2014 11:58:25 GMT -5
Splash mines! Sweet! I'd forgotten Mega Man didn't get those from the Junk Store couple!
Grammar patches for the police page:
"active recruitment drives that take place quarterly which allow island residents..." to "active recruitment drives that take place quarterly allow island residents..."
"...minimum requirements for application include being of the island's adult age (16) and completed basic education." to "...minimum requirements for application include being of the island's adult age (16) and completing basic education."
"...thanks to their coordination and numbers take make up for their limited individual abilities." to "...thanks to their coordination and numbers that make up for their limited individual abilities.
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Post by Mikéy on Jun 24, 2014 13:05:52 GMT -5
Ah yeah, and when you can get to the police page, down at the author's notes, "expore" should probably be changed to "explore", and I'd take the word "boring" out of the air quotes if it were me. It works where it is though. Also: "the ability to perform feats that Rock cannot accomplish thanks to their coordination and numbers take make up for their limited individual abilities." ought to be changed to "the ability to perform feats that Rock cannot accomplish thanks to their coordination and numbers that make up for their limited individual abilities." I'm loving their role so far! So much better than standing around with their hands behind their backs.
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Post by HF on Jun 24, 2014 18:28:09 GMT -5
Dashe, Mikéy: Thanks for proof-reading the profile entry! The text has been fixed now. And yes, Splash Mines make their appearance! They are going to be one of the few special weapons from the original game which are in the 'shared' category; meaning they're not exclusive to Rock and to give the cops something to make themselves useful with.
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Post by Rockman Striker on Jun 24, 2014 20:50:38 GMT -5
You forgot to add in the KTOX police bio that none of them has eyes XP Now seriously, I love the excesive amount of details you add to each character (or group) in order to make them more real, details such as the police duties, how they are perceived by the townspeople and why they reacted so brutally against the Casquet's crash landing*. There's also the COBUN entry at the glossary, I LOLed at the "Capsule Computer" reference... pure poetry.
*Gold city policemen were far more rude and organized against the Bonnes than KTOX cops, but I guess that's because their city has better budget, they can even afford to buy motorhorses, large ships and a mecha suit!
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Post by HF on Jul 1, 2014 8:12:24 GMT -5
(Sorry for the late reply) You forgot to add in the KTOX police bio that none of them has eyes XP Now seriously, I love the excesive amount of details you add to each character (or group) in order to make them more real, details such as the police duties, how they are perceived by the townspeople and why they reacted so brutally against the Casquet's crash landing*. Glad to know you liked the details added to the story! What I had to avoid when adding these details was not to force them into the spotlight, thankfully the profiles and glossary covers these points so as to not delay my (already) slow pace. You definitely know your stuff! I like making these trivial yet 'meaningful' additions. Just like real life, I guess? (hah) Update: Suddenly, another forward schedule slip!Nothing much to say for this one, besides some more fleshing out on details before stuff happens. Also, so much for the new 'equipment' Rock picked up. Edit: Hopefully these "schedule pushes" will force myself to churn out more pages.
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Post by HF on Jul 10, 2014 8:31:42 GMT -5
Been pretty quiet this week hasn't it? I'll just leave this here:
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Post by Dashe on Jul 10, 2014 11:02:27 GMT -5
It's because I'm not allowed to talk to myself on MMLS except in my own project threads. XD Anyway, bonus content is ALWAYS awesome.
It shouldn't be long before Tron really shows up, huh? We're in the middle of the Blumebear fight, after all.
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