Post by adam1589 on Jun 9, 2010 13:22:19 GMT -5
basically this is my OC Kieran's Story, as told by him first-person, it's not my MML character, but more like my generic, just wanted to see what you guys thought of him, namely how would you guys describe his personality:
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Heya, I'm Kieran Burner, I'm 19 years old, have three friends, and follow Jesus with all my heart, and i have a beautiful girlfriend amidst those three friends. Onto the point though, I've been given a divine gift. I'm able to command and manipulate fire, earth aw heck, I'm even able to command lava if I'm angry enough. Anyhow, my story's a short but detailed one, basically my girlfriend refuses to marry me unless i become more...forgiving...but at the same time she said that, this one dude busts out a move to summon the Seven Sins and control them to do his bidding. "Nice" I said when we realized this, "Just what I need: seven arch-demons running amok."
Ketsuka, My lovely GF, basically told me to do what i felt i had to, but to be compassionate about it, well, i grew up being taught, no that's not the word, more like "programmed", to dispel demons. So there was really not anything merciful about how I did it, i just flat out attacked these sins and attempted to wipe them from Earth's surface, sending them back to their infernal prison called The Lake of Fire, heh fire...yeah I'm semi-pyro if ya haven't guessed.
Anyhow, finally after defeating the sins we realized our foe, who was also the one who summoned them (no duh huh?) had absorbed their powers, and in one last-ditch effort to maintain his ideals, which were to eradicate all sin by becoming "Onesin" and dying, he launched a massive attack that only my pals and i could stop. Well using my pals' help I powered up into a semi-angelic form and beat the crud outta this guy, but finally the killing blow came...guess what...I let him live, weird huh, after all, he's all Seven Sins in one body a true high-class demon! Well look at it this way: i either let him live out of mercy or another option is i let him live so he face the people he hurt, sand thus live a life or eternal torture...Man some follower of Christ I am huh?
Well that's pretty much it, me in a nutshell, well more like acorn shell i'll just shuddup now...
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Heya, I'm Kieran Burner, I'm 19 years old, have three friends, and follow Jesus with all my heart, and i have a beautiful girlfriend amidst those three friends. Onto the point though, I've been given a divine gift. I'm able to command and manipulate fire, earth aw heck, I'm even able to command lava if I'm angry enough. Anyhow, my story's a short but detailed one, basically my girlfriend refuses to marry me unless i become more...forgiving...but at the same time she said that, this one dude busts out a move to summon the Seven Sins and control them to do his bidding. "Nice" I said when we realized this, "Just what I need: seven arch-demons running amok."
Ketsuka, My lovely GF, basically told me to do what i felt i had to, but to be compassionate about it, well, i grew up being taught, no that's not the word, more like "programmed", to dispel demons. So there was really not anything merciful about how I did it, i just flat out attacked these sins and attempted to wipe them from Earth's surface, sending them back to their infernal prison called The Lake of Fire, heh fire...yeah I'm semi-pyro if ya haven't guessed.
Anyhow, finally after defeating the sins we realized our foe, who was also the one who summoned them (no duh huh?) had absorbed their powers, and in one last-ditch effort to maintain his ideals, which were to eradicate all sin by becoming "Onesin" and dying, he launched a massive attack that only my pals and i could stop. Well using my pals' help I powered up into a semi-angelic form and beat the crud outta this guy, but finally the killing blow came...guess what...I let him live, weird huh, after all, he's all Seven Sins in one body a true high-class demon! Well look at it this way: i either let him live out of mercy or another option is i let him live so he face the people he hurt, sand thus live a life or eternal torture...Man some follower of Christ I am huh?
Well that's pretty much it, me in a nutshell, well more like acorn shell i'll just shuddup now...
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