"Cupid's Terrible Aim!" Complete

[Dashe]

Somehow the way you kept mentioning how Teisel's hair was grey and he was only twenty-seven makes me want to write a fic myself. On the flip side, you spelled "chaperone" wrong, unless you're from another anglophone country (as in, not the United States) where the word is spelled that way and I'm completely off--I did notice you spelled "colour" with a "u".

It'd have been nice if you'd recounted the details of Tron's actual capture, even if it would've ruined the element of surprise involved. Then again, stating it was Tron x Glyde in your notes spoiled whatever surprise may have occurred anyway. Maybe it wouldn't be a good idea to post them if you're trying to build suspense.

[Dashe]

steffie said:

For the Glyde x Tron spoiler thing; I mainly did it since I'm not so sure if it's wise or not to warn readers about the pairing. Thanks for the tip.

Yeah, the only time you'd do that though is if you wanted the pairing to be a surprise. If it's not, you should probably warn them.

[Rage]

In my honest opinion which I have many, I think Tron would have kicked Glyde in the face. That's probably just me. It is very interesting so far. I love to read your fan fics.

[Musashi]

Very fun to read, just as Teisel's New Look was. Can't wait to read more!

[Dashe]

That tunnel of love chapter would have probably been funnier if told (only) from Teisel's point of view. I actually like the fourth a little better, and under normal circumstances fan works involving the System don't really appeal to me that much. Maybe because the Bonnes were involved, it captured my attention. ;D

[Dashe]

Hurrah! Another fic completed! Congratulations--and with the new rule system, double-posting to update fan works is allowed! *Brings out the confetti*

[Rage]

Wow..I didn't even expect that ending. That was good. *drools* I must read more of your stuff. I haven't read so much in a long time.