"Humble Pie" One-shot

[Dashe]

A lot of the errors you made in your other fic also apply here. Some of your verb conjugations are a little off as well, and it's also really unclear as to exactly when Glyde realized the coffee shop belongs to the Bonnes and he'd had his order taken by a Servbot.

On the flip side, the part where Teisel compared Glyde's "crush" on Denise to Tron liking Mega Man made me giggle like a schoolgirl.

[Dashe]

I dunno, if it were me, I'd have probably played up on that quite a bit more, but then again, I tend to write in a way that glorifies the humorous (or, in my case, things that would've been humorous if somebody more capable were in charge of writing it).