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Post by aarond on Sept 16, 2004 18:20:24 GMT -5
Yeah, people were playing around on this topic in one of the boards, and Feldinaut actually dared somebody to write a fanfic about it, so I did. Here's the link: www.fanfiction.net/s/2059781/1/WARNING: It won't be phenomenally good, because the total writing time on it was like 2 hours, 13 minutes. Give me some feedback, because if you don't, I'll cry...I mean, LIFT WEIGHTS!
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Post by bluerobotgirl on Sept 16, 2004 19:57:10 GMT -5
That was great. Now that I think of it, I bet she IS a robot... XD
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Post by Fire Griffin on Sept 16, 2004 21:06:00 GMT -5
*sniff*
Tee hee...
That was excellent. Wonderful writing there, sir. *applauds* No real qualms here. Thanks for taking a weird idea and pulling it off nicely and believably. Not enough people do that.
(EDIT: Two hours, eh? That's really good then. Aren't ditties fun? XP)
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Post by Bureaucratic Model 1-3 on Sept 16, 2004 22:33:25 GMT -5
When monsters roar and fiends draw near, Never falter never fear, Just pick up some defenseless servebot, And throw it like a big, yellow rock.
It won't work, but it'll make you feel better. Great story, especially considering the time limit. Of course whenever I get into one of those, 'kill everybody' modes I usually wait until night falls to go crazy, but that's just me.
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Post by aarond on Sept 17, 2004 10:08:30 GMT -5
That Servbot poem is awesome. Liked the use of slant rhyme with Servbot/rock. Hee hee.
"Hey, baby, wanna kill all the humans?" ---Bender B. Rodriguez
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Post by feldinaut on Sept 17, 2004 11:37:56 GMT -5
Wow. Now that both you and Fire "Crinkle Pants" Griffin have written fanfics that I half-jokingly suggested, I've begun to wonder... Have I the gift? ((And don't ask me what that gift is. It may or may not be the Easy-Bake Oven™ I got for Christmas.))
Another fine job, Aaron "That Cool Guy" D. The image of Mayor Amelia spazzing out on everyone is a hilarious one that I'm sad didn't get used in the actual game. That, and also Teisel throwing servbots around. ((HILARITY! ;D)) And although you wrote this in such a short time, it's still the level of quality I've come to expect from you. Excellent job!
And on another note...
That made me crack up.
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Post by Tenshi2 on Sept 19, 2004 23:03:14 GMT -5
When I got the first game of MML, I also thought Amelia was a robot too. (Hate to say this Feldynaut, I'm sorta one too.) Like for one, The number of pencils in one gross is 144, the square root of 144 is 12, Helium, Neon, and Xenon are flammable substances, and Neptune, 8th planet from the sun, the moons are Nereid and Triton, named after the god of the sea.
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Post by fAB on Sept 21, 2004 18:36:51 GMT -5
I was going to make the comment that it should be "kill all carbons", as I thought I saw somewhere that someone said she was a Reaverbot, but you're just calling her a robot, so you're off the hook. LOL
Anyway, nice story for an on-the-spot quickie. LOL I wonder who originally created her...
*jots down an idea for possible future use*
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Post by Dashe on Sept 21, 2004 19:17:32 GMT -5
I'd been wondering why Amelia always spastically moved her arm all the time. Thanks for clearing that up.
Haha just kidding. Good fic though ;D
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Post by Tenshi2 on Sept 21, 2004 19:19:13 GMT -5
I was going to make the comment that it should be "kill all carbons", as I thought I saw somewhere that someone said she was a Reaverbot, but you're just calling her a robot, so you're off the hook. LOL Anyway, nice story for an on-the-spot quickie. LOL I wonder who originally created her... *jots down an idea for possible future use* Is this still about me fab?
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Post by aarond on Sept 21, 2004 20:53:30 GMT -5
Yeah, I figured too much into the whole Master System thing would be confusing, 'cause the Bonnes only have a hint about it, and the others don't even have a clue.
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Post by JMC47 on Sept 22, 2004 14:03:57 GMT -5
I think by the time Megaman gets back from the elysium that the thing about the elysium would already be in the news.
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