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Post by BlastMandrill on Jul 3, 2012 14:58:29 GMT -5
If only he didn't want to heal his bruised pride in the first place... The End? I think that this should've been changed to: "If only that stupid servbot hadn't burnt that Golden Refractor, the whole family would've cared less for Glyde and his crew" This was probably the root of the problem, since Tron and Tiesel might've given up their revenge once they were given the chance to work on the department store they were working on. Nevertheless,the fan-fic is pretty good. It goes a bit deeper into Glyde's life and the rest of his family(?). If the story continued, it would be great if there was more info on Glyde, since we only met Glyde in the MML games as a bad guy.
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Post by Dashe on Jul 3, 2012 14:59:55 GMT -5
Awww man, I wanted to see an action-packed rescue scene! :01:
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Post by Dashe on Jul 3, 2012 15:23:42 GMT -5
Practice makes perfect, you know! Since MMLS is on the small side, it's nice for getting the hang of those kinds of things you don't think are your strong points.
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Post by Loken on Jul 4, 2012 1:52:47 GMT -5
I really like the concept of Teisel liking kids. Maybe he could open The Bonne Daycare Service! Totally safe! Very good fanfic. I too would be interested in part 2 . BlastMandrill, If you like exploring the character of Glyde then you should read Steffie's other fanfics! She does a good Teisel in Marmalade Roses aswell!
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