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Post by Adrian2040 on Aug 17, 2011 15:55:04 GMT -5
Episode 1 - The McGregor Case.
This is something I did in 2009 in my spare time. It was some sort of in-class joke (Thus the reason why I changed some characters' names, especially the Judge's.)
However, I had some spare time last year so I animated a movie for it. I'll post that movie in here instead of the text and I'll continue this topic with Episode 2 in a written manner.
Enjoy!
(Also, should I keep the judge's name or should I make some sort of mini-plot twist to have his original name back?)
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Post by Mikéy on Aug 17, 2011 19:30:17 GMT -5
"I found the body of Mr. Turner. Upon examining, I noticed his heart was broken." "The law is not on our side right now." and sandwiches. Of course, sandwiches. Despite all of the fragmented grammar which drove me crazy while watching it, it was pretty entertaining. Reminds me a lot of all the wacky parties with Legends Ace Attorney. I eventually drove Trege crazy enough to finish. :12: Or maybe it was Blyka. Or the Another Story in Halcyon Team. But after a few months in the making, 3 cases were made all together. Talk about apathy.
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Post by Adrian2040 on Aug 17, 2011 21:07:05 GMT -5
I actually made it one year ago with the same engine as Legends Ace Attorney. I just created it as a game and filmed myself playing.
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Post by Adrian2040 on Sept 9, 2011 0:36:39 GMT -5
The Written Version:
Adrian2040 Presents
A NotePad Production
Ace Attorney Investigations The McGregor Case
Featuring:
Phoenix Wright as Defense Attorney Miles Edgeworth as Prosecutor McGregor as the Accused Kevin Shu as the Witness
and...
Mr. Hildebrand as the Butler
With Guest Participation of
Mr. Bacon as the Judge
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9:30 a.m. - Outside the Courtoom
McGregor: Mr. Wright. I command you to defend me. Wright: I know already. (Sigh) McGregor: You will defeat the evil emperor... I mean Judge and obtain my freedom. Wright: I guess so... McGregor: Good! I'll see you at the courtroom in an hour for the trial. Wright: Ok... (I'm still not sure if this guy is trustable, but I have to help him)
Edgeworth: Mr Wright. Wright: ! Edgeworth: I see you've prepared your case. Wright: Yeah, right. Edgeworth: Then I'll see you on court. I expect a lot of you, Wright. Wright: Same here. (I'm scared...)
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10:30 a.m. - Inside the Courtroom
Bacon: Is the prosecution ready? Edgeworth: Yes, your honour. Bacon: Is then the defense ready? Wright: ... Bacon: Mr. Wright? Wright: ! I mean yes my honour. Bacon: Good. Let's start the trial.
Bacon: The prosecution will now present the case. Edgeworth: Yes your honour. It appears that this is a case of murder. Bacon: Murder!? Edgeworth: Yes my honour. It appears that the athlete Mr. Turner was hurt by a bullet while doing a high jump. Bacon: I see. Edgeworth: The ballistic markings on the bullet brings us to a gun which has only a single fingerprint on the trigger. Bacon: And this is from? Edgeworth: Mr. McGregor. Wright: (Drats!) Bacon: But how is that possible? Only one single fingerprint?! Edgeworth: And we found a latex glove with a broken index section in... MR. MCGREGOR'S CAR!!! Wright: (I'm screwed.) But what about the motive!? Did he have a reason to do this? Edgeworth: He had... Wright: ! Edgeworth: And that's why I brought a witness. Bacon: Bailey, bring the witness to the stand...
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11:15 a.m. - Inside the Courtroom
Bacon: Witness, state your name and occupation. Shu: Kevin Shu. High School Student at Markham College. Prosecution: Will you tell us your testimony? Shu: OK! Wright: (This better has flukes, or else I'm dead.)
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TESTIMONY # 1
I was at school when Mr. McGregor showed up. He said he'd do the highest jump in history. He just jumped through the fence and landed fallen. He didn't stand up.
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Bacon: So he didn't stand up because he died. Shu: Exactly! Wright: (This testimony is so vague. It is flawless! Unless...) Wright: OBJECTION!!!! Shu: ! Wright: I can see through your lies Mr. Shu. (Hope this works) Wright: If he jumped through the fence, he would have fallen outside of the school! Edgeworth: ! Shu: And? Wright: And you can't leave school. So! Shu: ! Wright: How could you have seen him not standing up! Bacon: ! Shu: ... Aarghghgh!!!! Bacon: Edgeworth! Edgeworth: Dont't worry your honour. The witness will correct this misunderstanding. Shu: I sure will!
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TESTIMONY # 2
Shu: The door was opened. I was excited, so I escaped school just to see him. However, he didn't wake up, so I called the butler for help!
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Bacon: This is the end of his testimony, and we still don't have a clear motive. Do you have something to say, Mr. Wright? Wright: (That was too vague. I can't find a fluke on that) There is no more information we can get from this witness.
Bacon: The information we have is too vague to declare a verdict. I will give you one more day for both the defense and prosecution to investigate on the case. (Wright: Great!) I declare this o... Edgeworth: HOLD IT!!! Wright: ! Bacon: ! Edgeworth: There is another witness. Bacon: And who may this be? Edgeworth: It is the butler. I propose for him to take up to the stand. Bacon: I'll allow that. Wright: (Drats!) Bacon: Bailey, bring on the butler to the stand.
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12:45 p.m. - Inside the Courtroom
Bacon: Witness, state your name and occupation. Butler: My name is Mr. Hildebrand! I'm a biology teacher at Markham School... and a the director's butler! Wright: ... Edgeworth: Mr. Hildebrand, proceed with your testimony. Butler: Yes Mr. Prosecutor. Wright: (Get ready, Wright!)
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TESTIMONY # 1
Butler: The Shu boy told me to come outside to school for something important. Normally I'd try to avoid these things because they might be pranks, but he was desperate, so I went out. I found the body of Mr. Turner. Upon examining it, I noticed his heart was broken. He was dead due to the huge fall.
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Bacon: So that's what happened... Edgeworth: As you can see, the body was found dead and the evidence points out Mr. McGregor is the murderer. Bacon: I have nothing else to say. Therefore, I conclude this with the verdict of... Wright: OBJECTION!!! Bacon: ! Edgeworth: ! Butler: Heh!? Wright: (I almost lost there. I gotta say something, fast!) Wright: I found a fluke in your testimony, Mr. Hildebrand! Butler: Shout it out, mate! Wright: You're a biology teacher, right? Butler: So what? Wright: If you're a biology teacher, you must know then that: HEARTS CAN'T BE BROKEN ON FALLS!!! Edgeworth: ... It was a bullet... Wright: (Gotcha!) Then how why did he say he died because of "THE HUGE FALL". Edgeworth: ! Bacon: Edgeworth! Explain this! Edgeworth: I've got no decent explanation for this. Wright: Therefore, I accuse Mr. Hildebrand of MURDERING MR. TURNER!!! Bacon: ! Butler: WhaWhaWhaWhat!? Edgeworth: (This can't be happening to me...)
Bacon: That's a very grave accusation you're doing, Mr. Wright. Can you support it with some proof. Wright: Not yet. Edgeworth: Then how can you proof it? Wright: (Hehe) With proof OF A MOTIVE!!! Bacon: ! Edgeworth ! Butler: Eh!? Wright: Take that! Edgeworth: A burned book...? Wright: Yes, a book. This book was found half burned on Mr. Turner's damaged backpack. Edgeworth: And.. Wright: This edge is neat. Read the fineprint. Edgeworth: "Written by" ... MR. HILDEBRAND?!?! Butler: Arghgh!! Wright: Exactly! Bacon: I know you must have loved that book, but that's no reason for murder. Butler: But I didn't kill anybody! This is all wrong! Edgeworth: Hehe... Wright: ... Edgeworth: You've got a motive. But you still can't explain the matter with the broken glove in McGregor's car, and the gun persay. You don't even hace a decisive piece of proof. Wright: (You got me there...) Bacon: Then we need more information. Mr Hildebrand! Please tell us more of your connection with Mr. Turner, and if possible with the accused. Butler: Of course, your honour... Wright: (I know this guy is guilty, and I will prove it!)
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TESTIMONY # 2
Butler: Mr. Turner was a great man. He always said he hated everyone, but in a funny way. We and Mr. McGregor had been great friends since he entered school. In fact, we always went together in Mc Gregor's car to the ice cream store after school, so we'd eat some treats. We also went shooting since we are shooting fans. We were such good friends I'd always forgive their pranks. In fact, I made some of my own too!
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Bacon: Ahh! So you were friends with the victim and with the accused. Butler: Yes, my honour. I can't believe he killed our best friend. Wright: (Trying to hide your guiltness, aren't you? This time I won't hold back!) Wright: HOLD IT! Butler: ! Wright: You say you made some pranks of your own. Butler: Yes. So what, matey? Wright: What kind of plans? Butler: Well, once I cut a finger slot in one of McGregor's favourites shooting gloves. He will never get rid of those. Wright: What finger? Butler: The index one, in the right glove. Bacon: ! Edgeworth: ! Butler: ? Wright: (Gotcha!) Mr. McGregor had a hobby consisting on the shooting sport. He always wear his favourite shooting gloves, even if broken. And he is right handed, right? Butler: Right, so... ARGRGRGRGR!!!
Bacon: What can you say now, Mr. Hildebrand! Butler: Arhggh. You've discovered this. Now what? There is still no decisive proof! You cannot prove I was the murderer! Edgeworth: Stop this madness! Wright: (What?) Edgeworth: It is now so blatantly obvious that you're the murderer. Wright: (WHAT?) Bacon: Mr. Edgeworth?! Butler: How dare you! My own prosecutor! Edgeworth: That book... was your masterpiece! Bacon: ! Wright: ! Edgeworth: After some tests I recognized the real title of the book: "My Life". Whole Audience: ... Butler: That book was my masterpiece. It recorded all the things I have achieved in my life. It took me years of pain to achieve and record all of these records. It is my life. Edgeworth: Yes. And in one of his pranks, Mr. Turner put your book in his backpack. And you, in one of your pranks, burned the pack. Butler: Yes. And when I noticed my book was in there... Edgeworth: You tried to saved it, but it was too late... Wright: (Edgeworth...) Butler: But it is my life! And I won't forgive him! Bacon: Even if it was a silly prank and it was your life achievements on paper, it is no reason for murder!
Butler: But you still don't have decisive proof I did it! You can't prove it, even if it is blatantly obvious! Bacon: Sadly, that's true. I can't do anything from here. Law is not on our side right now. Wright: (Thanks Edgeworth, but we can't go on now. It's all lost...) Edgeworth: HOLD IT! Bacon: ! Wright: ! Butler: ! Edgeworth: Actually, law is on our side. Butler: How so? Edgeworth: Because I've got DECISIVE PROOF! Butler: How could you! Bacon: Mr. Edgeworth, I don't understand the meaning of this. But if you have decisive proof, please show it to us. Edgeworth: Of course. Please, Mr. Hildebrand. Remove your gloves. Butler: ...Of course. Here they're. Wright: (What the heck is your plan, Edgeworth?) Edgeworth: (Gotcha!) Your honor, can you see the material of this glove. Bacon: Yes. It is a simple cotton glove. What with it? Edgeworth: It seems the murderer thought he would be safe by firing with a glove. But cotton always is a bit "sticky", since if you check in the index finger slot of the cotton glove... Bacon: But there is? Gun Powder! Butler: WhaWhaWhaWha!!?? Wright: (No way!) Butler: But I also practice shooting. How do you know this gun powder came from when I killed Mr. Turner?! Bacon: ! Wright: ... Edgeworth: I was just gonna say that the gun powder had adquired a bit of the orange colour of the gun due to its very old age, but your confession is a more effective proof. Butler: Aargharargargarhghhg!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *Faints*
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02:00 p.m. - Inside the Courtroom
Bacon: Mr. Hildebrand has already been taking to custody. I didn't expect such a drama of events, but we actually got found the real murderer and solve the trial on a single day. Simply amazing. Well done Mr. Wright. Wright: Err... Thanks your honour. But you should thanks the prosecution for this. Bacon: Ahh! You quite surprised me, Mr. Edgeworth. That was very honorable from you. Edgeworth: Thanks, my honour. Bacon: And now. McGregor. I declare you:
INNOCENT!
Case closed.
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02:30 p.m. - Outside the Courtroom
Wright: (I can believe I won that. I could have sworn I would have lost.) McGregor: Mr. Wright? Wright: Ahh! McGregor: Thanks for your efforts, Mr. Wright. Now I'm finally a free man. Wright: Don't worry, Mr. McGregor. I trusted you from the beginning. (I guess...) McGregor: I've got to go. If you see Mr. Edgeworth, give him my thanks too. *McGregor Leaves*
Edgeworth: Wright! Wright: Ahh! Edgeworth: Quit whining like a baby. You're an attorney. Wright: I just didn't expect that. Edgeworth: Good show, Mr. Wright. Wright: But you were the star, Edgeworth. But I want to know: Why did you do that? Why did you lose on purpose? Edgeworth: Wright, there is something you've got to understand. Wright: ? Edgeworth: Law is not a sport. It is not a game to play to win. Wright: ! Edgeworth: Our roles as lawyers is not to beat each other, but to cooperate with each other. Isn't that right, Wright? Wright: That's true! Edgeworth: And now you owe me 100 dollars! Wright: What?! Edgeworth: Remember that sandwich I bought you a year ago. Well, now I'm charging interests. So you gotta pay this now or I'm putting you on trial. Get it? Wright: ... OBJECTION!!!
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The McGregor Case
THE END
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