Post by adam1589 on Jun 12, 2010 0:02:42 GMT -5
Foreword:
FSOB was a concept I had for the ZX-series however they fast-oned me with Advent's Model A, which I had original planned as my OC's Biometal, so I converted FSOB into MML. Characters-wise, I incorporated a few MM faves as well as my FCs.
OCs: Kieran, Asuka, Serena, Torch
MM characters:
Zero MML-style basing him from XCM.
Bass - Original design for MML style, based on BN version.
Rogue -MML-style re-design of Rogue from MMSF2/3, but no Mu barrier.
Yuna, Sera, Roll, Trigger, Bonnes, and Gramps - all from MML.
Villains:
Razor.
--anyhow onto the story:
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CHP1: The story begins: Blade Sabers assembled
ROAN Isle:
It was a cloudy day that had an eerie feel to it. The grey clouds in the sky near Roan Isle even made the sunlight turn color and add a grim light to the atmosphere. A sheer of wind surged through the air as the doors of a metal hut-like building opened. The wind nearly stopped as a digging team brought out five person-sized capsules. The leader of the team gave a low grunt and moved over to the side to watch his lackeys do the work, “Remember,” he said in a slightly mechanical voice, “If any of these goods get damaged, you’ll be locked in a ruin.”
Three Months Later, BLADE HQ:
A man sat in what seemed to be a hoverchair, he was using some videomonitor to conduct a weird form of business but the screen turned from it’s baby blue to a red color saying “call” in silver letters. The man said, “Access” and the video monitor began to play an ecstatic voice. “Sir Razor, the team you ordered to be equipped with the new Bio-Gear packs has been assembled, shall I send them in?” Razor simply said, “Yes, send them in, all at once”
Five individuals walked in trough a wide double-door on the far wall behind Razor. In the center was on clad in red yellow and black with a black helmet that had two red spike-like protrusions coming from the center of the brow. To his left was a man clad in red, orange and blue with a black thermal suit underneath his heavy duty-thermal-resistance-style armor. The one in the thermal gear didn’t have a helmet but his hair was flame-like and so red it almost looked black. His eyes were brown and had flame-like highlights in them. The one next to the one in thermal gear was a young woman clad in golden-yellow armor with a design similar to that of ninja sporting kunai and other ninja-like gear throughout the visible pockets on her silver leggings. Her curly hair was split into four pigtail-like extensions at the 2, 10, 4, and 8-o’clock positions on her head with each tail curving towards the ground, her emerald eyes seemed to show a playful nature.
The other side was comprised of two individuals both clad in black. The one who stood to the far-right had a purple helmet with a neon-blue visor and sported a huge sword on his back, his chest had an odd M-like symbol and his overall armor was very rounded and compact. His eyes were cold and soulless and his long white hair came to his knees behind him.
The final member standing next to the one in the center, was clad in a navy under-suit with black armor resembling a bat-like motif and his red eyes were see-able trough a helmet with two yellow spikes resembling eyes protruding backwards from the 11 and 1-o'clock points on the helmet’s upper-temple.
Razor spoke “Men, I have a task for you: There is a boy named Kieran Burner, he’s found something of mine and i wish for it back, go and retrieve this item…use force only if necessary. If he asks your name: go by the name ‘Blade Sabers’. Zero…I’ll trust you to lead, Rogue, you’re next-in command. Now go and don’t come back without my item.”
The man in the purple helmet spoke up, “Why do we even have to bore ourselves with bothering to listen to you?” The man in red turned, “Rogue, calm down, This boy has something of our boss’, so we are going to get it back,…” Rogue shot the man in red a look and scoffed, “The mighty Zero, the finest sword in all of Blade, bah, how about we see who’s worthy of team leader: if I bring the item back, I lead, if you do it, you lead, got it?” The female member scoffed and girlishly said, “Rogue you’re such a whimp…”
Rogue drew his blade but Zero did the same with his nimble-looking beam rapier, but not in aggression, instead he held the rapier’s point to Rogue’s blade and said, “Enough Rogue…I accept your petty challenge, but know this: I’ve already won.”
1.2: INTRO: KIERAN
A young man wearing a pair of black overalls with a grey t-shirt and a matching rey cap sat down on the seat of the bike he was working on, “Oh man Kieran, what have you gotten yourself into?” he asked himself as though he were speaking to someone next to him. “Leaving the island huh?” he said in mock-reply. He smiled, got up, removed his hat and fixed his glasses, revealing both his hair and his eyes to be dark terran brown.
He pulled the tail-holder out of his hair and let his curly mullet drop down, then reworked it into a bunny-tail like ball behind his neck, “Time to see if this armor has any uses in mechanics” he said with a sliver of hope. He twisted his wristwatch’s faceplate and his entire outfit shifted into a type of black, cylindrical based armor. The gauntlets sported yellow on the backs of the hands and fingertips with a small yellow line trailing from the backplate to the fingertips of each finger except the thumb.
He sighed and held his right hand up, opening a type of holo-menu. He looked through the menu’s content by sliding it with his left hand. Finally he gave up and said, “Oh well, the bike’s able to make it to the next island, and I’m sure I’ll find a good mechanic there.”
A voice came from afar, “Well…I can fix your bike…but I want your armor in return. Kieran turned only to have a long, thin, red energy blade placed by his neck, the man holding the sword said, “Name’s Zero, and my boss want his armor back now…so be nice and return it.”
Kieran looked the man in the eye and said calmly, “Who’s your boss…wait…what do you mean his armor? Sorry to tell you, but my pal built this armor for me, he made it off of a chest plate he found in the ruins on this island…it was busted so he patched it up and added some extras to it…”
Zero gave a cold stare in reply, then suddenly said, “Guess I’ll have to take it from you then, better it be me than my teammate, Rogue…” Kieran raised and eyebrow and asked, “Rogue? Team? Seriously who are you guys?”
Rogue on the other hand had been watching from a cliff, and began to advance, with his sword drawn. He began in a slow walk but then rushed both men in a furious charge. Kieran dived backwards and Zero side stepped to his right to get out of the way. However, Rogue’s sword cut the bike Kieran had worked on in half.
Kieran morphed his right hand into a type of gun-like extension and aimed, saying angrily, “You, you’ll burn for that!” he forced the gun to fire, but it wasn’t energy or bullets, it was a stream of fire. Rogue yelled in agony, then blocked the fire stream with his sword.
The other three members of Blade had just come to where they could view the fight but they couldn’t hear the words being said. They were, at first, stunned to see both Zero and Rogue hand not yet completed the mission. Zero got up and charged. But not at the mission target. Zero sliced, and rogue screamed in agony. Zero agitatedly said “Try to attack me huh? Well that’s why you’ll never be a team leader.”
The three members of the team were in shock, the young woman look to her side sand said, “Torch, Bass, let’s go. Save the mission target for last, help Rogue!” both men replied, “Yes Ma’am”
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to be continued: Turmoil of the mightiest Blade
open to comments now
FSOB was a concept I had for the ZX-series however they fast-oned me with Advent's Model A, which I had original planned as my OC's Biometal, so I converted FSOB into MML. Characters-wise, I incorporated a few MM faves as well as my FCs.
OCs: Kieran, Asuka, Serena, Torch
MM characters:
Zero MML-style basing him from XCM.
Bass - Original design for MML style, based on BN version.
Rogue -MML-style re-design of Rogue from MMSF2/3, but no Mu barrier.
Yuna, Sera, Roll, Trigger, Bonnes, and Gramps - all from MML.
Villains:
Razor.
--anyhow onto the story:
------------------------------------------------------------------------
CHP1: The story begins: Blade Sabers assembled
ROAN Isle:
It was a cloudy day that had an eerie feel to it. The grey clouds in the sky near Roan Isle even made the sunlight turn color and add a grim light to the atmosphere. A sheer of wind surged through the air as the doors of a metal hut-like building opened. The wind nearly stopped as a digging team brought out five person-sized capsules. The leader of the team gave a low grunt and moved over to the side to watch his lackeys do the work, “Remember,” he said in a slightly mechanical voice, “If any of these goods get damaged, you’ll be locked in a ruin.”
Three Months Later, BLADE HQ:
A man sat in what seemed to be a hoverchair, he was using some videomonitor to conduct a weird form of business but the screen turned from it’s baby blue to a red color saying “call” in silver letters. The man said, “Access” and the video monitor began to play an ecstatic voice. “Sir Razor, the team you ordered to be equipped with the new Bio-Gear packs has been assembled, shall I send them in?” Razor simply said, “Yes, send them in, all at once”
Five individuals walked in trough a wide double-door on the far wall behind Razor. In the center was on clad in red yellow and black with a black helmet that had two red spike-like protrusions coming from the center of the brow. To his left was a man clad in red, orange and blue with a black thermal suit underneath his heavy duty-thermal-resistance-style armor. The one in the thermal gear didn’t have a helmet but his hair was flame-like and so red it almost looked black. His eyes were brown and had flame-like highlights in them. The one next to the one in thermal gear was a young woman clad in golden-yellow armor with a design similar to that of ninja sporting kunai and other ninja-like gear throughout the visible pockets on her silver leggings. Her curly hair was split into four pigtail-like extensions at the 2, 10, 4, and 8-o’clock positions on her head with each tail curving towards the ground, her emerald eyes seemed to show a playful nature.
The other side was comprised of two individuals both clad in black. The one who stood to the far-right had a purple helmet with a neon-blue visor and sported a huge sword on his back, his chest had an odd M-like symbol and his overall armor was very rounded and compact. His eyes were cold and soulless and his long white hair came to his knees behind him.
The final member standing next to the one in the center, was clad in a navy under-suit with black armor resembling a bat-like motif and his red eyes were see-able trough a helmet with two yellow spikes resembling eyes protruding backwards from the 11 and 1-o'clock points on the helmet’s upper-temple.
Razor spoke “Men, I have a task for you: There is a boy named Kieran Burner, he’s found something of mine and i wish for it back, go and retrieve this item…use force only if necessary. If he asks your name: go by the name ‘Blade Sabers’. Zero…I’ll trust you to lead, Rogue, you’re next-in command. Now go and don’t come back without my item.”
The man in the purple helmet spoke up, “Why do we even have to bore ourselves with bothering to listen to you?” The man in red turned, “Rogue, calm down, This boy has something of our boss’, so we are going to get it back,…” Rogue shot the man in red a look and scoffed, “The mighty Zero, the finest sword in all of Blade, bah, how about we see who’s worthy of team leader: if I bring the item back, I lead, if you do it, you lead, got it?” The female member scoffed and girlishly said, “Rogue you’re such a whimp…”
Rogue drew his blade but Zero did the same with his nimble-looking beam rapier, but not in aggression, instead he held the rapier’s point to Rogue’s blade and said, “Enough Rogue…I accept your petty challenge, but know this: I’ve already won.”
1.2: INTRO: KIERAN
A young man wearing a pair of black overalls with a grey t-shirt and a matching rey cap sat down on the seat of the bike he was working on, “Oh man Kieran, what have you gotten yourself into?” he asked himself as though he were speaking to someone next to him. “Leaving the island huh?” he said in mock-reply. He smiled, got up, removed his hat and fixed his glasses, revealing both his hair and his eyes to be dark terran brown.
He pulled the tail-holder out of his hair and let his curly mullet drop down, then reworked it into a bunny-tail like ball behind his neck, “Time to see if this armor has any uses in mechanics” he said with a sliver of hope. He twisted his wristwatch’s faceplate and his entire outfit shifted into a type of black, cylindrical based armor. The gauntlets sported yellow on the backs of the hands and fingertips with a small yellow line trailing from the backplate to the fingertips of each finger except the thumb.
He sighed and held his right hand up, opening a type of holo-menu. He looked through the menu’s content by sliding it with his left hand. Finally he gave up and said, “Oh well, the bike’s able to make it to the next island, and I’m sure I’ll find a good mechanic there.”
A voice came from afar, “Well…I can fix your bike…but I want your armor in return. Kieran turned only to have a long, thin, red energy blade placed by his neck, the man holding the sword said, “Name’s Zero, and my boss want his armor back now…so be nice and return it.”
Kieran looked the man in the eye and said calmly, “Who’s your boss…wait…what do you mean his armor? Sorry to tell you, but my pal built this armor for me, he made it off of a chest plate he found in the ruins on this island…it was busted so he patched it up and added some extras to it…”
Zero gave a cold stare in reply, then suddenly said, “Guess I’ll have to take it from you then, better it be me than my teammate, Rogue…” Kieran raised and eyebrow and asked, “Rogue? Team? Seriously who are you guys?”
Rogue on the other hand had been watching from a cliff, and began to advance, with his sword drawn. He began in a slow walk but then rushed both men in a furious charge. Kieran dived backwards and Zero side stepped to his right to get out of the way. However, Rogue’s sword cut the bike Kieran had worked on in half.
Kieran morphed his right hand into a type of gun-like extension and aimed, saying angrily, “You, you’ll burn for that!” he forced the gun to fire, but it wasn’t energy or bullets, it was a stream of fire. Rogue yelled in agony, then blocked the fire stream with his sword.
The other three members of Blade had just come to where they could view the fight but they couldn’t hear the words being said. They were, at first, stunned to see both Zero and Rogue hand not yet completed the mission. Zero got up and charged. But not at the mission target. Zero sliced, and rogue screamed in agony. Zero agitatedly said “Try to attack me huh? Well that’s why you’ll never be a team leader.”
The three members of the team were in shock, the young woman look to her side sand said, “Torch, Bass, let’s go. Save the mission target for last, help Rogue!” both men replied, “Yes Ma’am”
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to be continued: Turmoil of the mightiest Blade
open to comments now