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Post by mirak on Jul 22, 2009 1:54:42 GMT -5
www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/257548My latest song. See description the-ah whatever i'll just copypaste. "Try listening all of it before proceeding to write a critique or commenting, thank you. This is an original song i composed while i was viewing some old unsubmitted spritesheets i designed for a game involving my OC's, this song is called Hyann Library, the theme of the ancient, abandoned library from Estolas, the city where my OC's live. An ominous building that hides many mysteries and treasures. I practiced playing with velocity for this track and the result was not bad, but not extremely good, it's more than ready to be used in a proffesional, 3D game if it had to be used on one, but the sound still can be upgraded. Each song i make is better than the last one, eh? I was worried a bit about the tempo, the beggining, specially after the initial string crescendo, can be a bit slow and bothersome, but not for people who listen to it for the first time or in-game (this, i could notice). I leaved it as it is since i believe i was the one imagining it, after all, i listened to it like a hundred times while making it. I hate the harp i used. That's a given. Maybe i'll replace it later, though i probably won't. I just LOVE the part when the flute comes in, sounds so pro. Enjoy. Oh, and comment. I don't care much about score, i prefer critique."
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Post by mirak on Jul 22, 2009 14:45:38 GMT -5
UPDATE, click on the link again. After reading some excellent reviews on the TIG Source forums, i fixed a few things:
1.- Completely replaced the harp arpeggio and lead for concert piano, it definitely sounds better. 2.- Overlapped piano keys so that they sound a lot more fluid. 3.- Changed the ending, lowered the volume and velocity of some percussion effects like the crash cymbal at the last minute.
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Meddling with Legends 1, Legends 2 and Mega Man 64 data.
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Post by Trege on Jul 22, 2009 17:17:33 GMT -5
I thought it was a really awesome song, very soothing It also seems to fit a library perfectly.
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Post by Musashi on Jul 22, 2009 17:45:10 GMT -5
I don't know what to say but it's a great piece. You've gotten better since the last time I've heard anything from you, Mir@k. Sorry I can't give any real critique.
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