Post by Captain Amadeus (Legendary Em) on Jul 7, 2009 8:50:05 GMT -5
Uh, mildly-creepy story you've got here. Well written, though. The lack of actual dialogue makes it plod along a bit, but that's to be expected from an internal monologue.
The very, VERY first fanfiction I wrote was Kirby V.S. The Alien, when I was ten years old. It was about Kirby and Gooey traveling the world in search of an alien that could steal peoples forms. I don't remember much about it, but I think it's funny that I decided to make Gooey the voice of reason, and Kirby the bungler.
The very, VERY first fanfiction I wrote was Kirby V.S. The Alien, when I was ten years old. It was about Kirby and Gooey traveling the world in search of an alien that could steal peoples forms. I don't remember much about it, but I think it's funny that I decided to make Gooey the voice of reason, and Kirby the bungler.