Paragon
Ganburi
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I've been gone a long time, haven't I? :P
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Post by Paragon on Mar 27, 2009 16:04:51 GMT -5
Just a word of warning: This fic is made almost entirely of OCs. I'd like more comments on my writing style than the characters, though any professional opinions on my own(he'd be Navix) would be appreciated. Another: Don't mention the length of my initial chapters against my later ones. That was bad memory. And fans of P3 will note that some initial events are out of order. I realize that myself, but I think I managed to cover up those mistakes. Link here: www.fanfiction.net/s/4460094/1/Organization_Persona
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