New Legends Fanfic

[CrazyNutso]

Ok, I'm an old hat at fanfic, but this is my first try doing Megaman Legends fanfic, so keep that in mind. I've put two chapters up at fanfiction.net, but I don't know if they're both viewable yet.

I'm interested to know what everyone thinks, thanks!

Crazy Nutso

oh yeah, it's at this link.. . (duh, almost forgot!)

www.fanfiction.net/s/2178364/1/

[Paragon]

That fic was really funny. "Tron is a highly experienced mechanic and engineer. If only she wasn't such a (beep)." Well, you get the idea, you wrote it.

[CrazyNutso]

I've added another chapter to this fic, so check it out, if you're interested in that sort of thing. Here's the link:

www.fanfiction.net/s/2178364/3/

Oh, and if this constitutes Spam, I'm real sorry, let me know.

CN

[aarond]

Hey, pretty good so far. This is a little anal of me, but I always capitalize the second "m" in "MegaMan," and also always capitalize "Servbots." Like you care, right?

Anyway, everything seems pretty well-done. The third chapter seemed excessively long when compared with the first two, so maybe split it up if you have another that long.

MegaMan seems like he's having a good time, otherwise he would have figured himself a way out of the Gesellschaft, right? 'Cause let's be honest, he could probably even survive the explosion if he couldn't get the collar off.

It kind of freaks me out when someone writes in present tense, but at least you're not switching between present and past tenses, which would have been far, far worse.

[CrazyNutso]

aarond said:

It kind of freaks me out when someone writes in present tense, but at least you're not switching between present and past tenses, which would have been far, far worse.

I have a big problem with tense, and have been trying hard to keep everything in the same tense, present being the one I chose. purely at random. It is a bit longer (longer then both previous chapters together) but that's just how it came out. The only way I could think of to fix it would be to separate the Roll story and the Megaman story.

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www.fanfiction.net/s/2178364/4/

new chapter up, but as a warning, it's got the evilest cliffhanger ending EVER!

muh ha ha ha ha!

CN

Feldinaut: I know you had to bump, so your double post is excused.

[feldinaut]

Well I just now got to reading everything that was posted today. All in all, I like it. It's definitely on the better end of the Legends fics I've read (which are composed of quite a few horrible fanfics and a handful of excellent ones, so I mean that as a compliment). Your plot is pretty solid so far, and I think you've done a good job keeping this "Legendsy."

I'm not the biggest fan of fan characters. However, Adriana is actually not bad. I would like have seen more about her interactions when it was just she and Roll together. I have a feeling some hilarious moments might have come out of that arrangement.

Also, I was glad to see Glyde and Klaymoor, among other characters, pop up in the story, if only for a little while. ;D

Anything I disliked has basically been covered by other people. Keep up the good work! I'll drop you a review on FF.net sometime, too.

[CrazyNutso]

Feldinaut said:

Well I just now got to reading everything that was posted today. All in all, I like it. It's definitely on the better end of the Legends fics I've read (which are composed of quite a few horrible fanfics and a handful of excellent ones, so I mean that as a compliment). Your plot is pretty solid so far, and I think you've done a good job keeping this "Legendsy."

Thanks. I plan on eventually sending it in to Legends Station, maybe after it's totally complete. On the other hand, when I started it I thought it'd only be a few chapters.

I'm not the biggest fan of fan characters. However, Adriana is actually not bad. I would like have seen more about her interactions when it was just she and Roll together. I have a feeling some hilarious moments might have come out of that arrangement.

Also, I was glad to see Glyde and Klaymoor, among other characters, pop up in the story, if only for a little while. ;D

Anything I disliked has basically been covered by other people. Keep up the good work! I'll drop you a review on FF.net sometime, too.

Well, I did run through each chapter and shove everything into the past tense, so maybe it's not quite so hard on the gramarians any longer. Except for my countless other gramatical errors, of course!

Actually now that I think about it, I could have use Denise from MoTB, but I can't see her being quite as bloodthirsty. . . Anyhow, I've also added the next chapter, for those interested.