My original story....

[bluerobotgirl]

....if anyone's actually clicked this far, you don't have to worry, it's a very short story.

However, possibly in the future, I'll be actually writing out another story I need to write, and so I will have a thread to put it on. Handy, huh?

Anyway, it's a very short story about a robot, and it's at fictionpress.com/~bluerobotgirl

btw, this was mainly posted for Pharohman's benefit, since his AIM still appears to be broken and that it will give him something to do for at least a few minutes. Soon I do hope to post my mideval(sp?)/fantasy story, and that will be much longer. Just gotta get around to writing it.... ;o;

[aarond]

That was pretty good. The idea was very good, but I think it might have been better-suited to a longer tale. I think you put in the right amount of paragraph breaks, but for some reason, the site didn't post them properly or something, so it looks like one long unbroken paragraph. Also, at one point, you slipped into present tense "Thirteen is an unlucky number..." Obviously, try not to do that.

Since I don't have a fictionpress.com account, I can't leave you a review there.

One more thing. Your link was broken, because you needed to put in the "w's" like this:

www.fictionpress.com/~bluerobotgirl