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May 14, 2005 13:08:22 GMT -5
Post by blizrun on May 14, 2005 13:08:22 GMT -5
The fanfic piece I sent in has finally been put up. I am a happy writer.
Anyone mind telling me what they think of it?
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CrazyNutso
Zakobon
Tron in disguise . . . with glasses!
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May 14, 2005 19:55:53 GMT -5
Post by CrazyNutso on May 14, 2005 19:55:53 GMT -5
Pretty good, actually. I like the characterizations. It would be interesting to see something a bit longer though, or another shortie. Maybe you should try the Drabble thread. ( mmls.proboards7.com/index.cgi?board=talkfan&action=display&n=1&thread=1096329424 ) The interaction between Rock and Roll is pretty good. I never really thought about the origins of the 'zetasaber' before. Anywho, keep up the good work. CN
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May 14, 2005 20:05:04 GMT -5
Post by feldinaut on May 14, 2005 20:05:04 GMT -5
Aw, Blizrun, I really like it!
I'm really not hot on "crossovers" or the X series in general, but it's because of people who DON'T handle it as well as you did. It annoys the crap out of me when people write a Legends... But make it very clear they like the X series way more. But I'm not sure why I'm whining about that since your story was good about adding the X element as just a little bit of backstory, making the Zetsabre item more than just a cameo, of sorts.
In fact, I liked how you had an explanation for a lot of little things... It's nice to see that kind of imagination in a writer.
The writing itself was very solid too, not boring or "short sentence-y. " Like CrazyNutso mentioned, the interactions between Rock and Roll were very in-character as well.
Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope you'll be writing more, too.
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