Stuff for a friend

[Edwardo Rocket]

Rooftop Requiem
Swordy

Stuff for a friend of mine, over at The Fallout Shelter.
Whatcha think? Lay it on me, gimme some hints on how to improve, all that jazz.

[Santa Melty]

Wow. That reminds me of the kinds of things I draw. I love them. @_@

As for improvements, try to make the different parts more distinct. It’s hard to tell what’s what in the first picture. Then, try to add a little more detail and make things more precise. For example, the sword in the second picture look as though it is bending downwards. Mostly small stuff such as that.

That and few dynamic poses with a bit of color should add up to a brilliant picture.