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Post by Dashe on Feb 16, 2017 16:02:45 GMT -5
Yay, no more lefty slant! You've got a good sense of perspective now that that's been fixed. Feet tend to be on the same ground plane all around.
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Post by Digouter on Feb 17, 2017 0:43:39 GMT -5
Hahahaha, thank you thank you *bow, bow*
Though seriously, I appreciate the feedback since it gives a keen awareness to these things. It honestly didn't work as well when I was younger, but eventually the desire to improve overrides silly personal feelings and ego - well, to an extent! Of all these I'm actually most proud of Brooke haha. I cooked her up in an angle I wasn't used to (needed a subtle touch I never really messed around with much)... the character herself means a lot to me too for personal reasons!
More characters to come soon!
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Post by Space Apollo on Feb 27, 2017 23:45:58 GMT -5
Very nice! I love the details in the images, and the clean lineart. I look forward to seeing what you do with this.
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Post by Avegodro on Feb 28, 2017 0:24:17 GMT -5
This artwork, setting and characters, it's all beautiful. I'm loving what you have done so far. Keep up the awesome work and can't wait to see what comes next. ( Really like that Reaverbot themed compass on the map. )
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Post by Digouter on Mar 3, 2017 0:35:13 GMT -5
Awww, thanks a bunch Space, Avegodro . I really appreciate the feedback! I am a very big fan of clean(ish) lineart to the point where unless it's digital I don't really color haha. Though I have been practicing colored pencils! Okay, with this one I managed to get a good app that can take nice bright pictures with my phone. I was inspired by the Red Ash stuff Dashe had put up, and this is what I came up with! This is Bran again! Though in a style I'm kind of more comfy with haha. Just a smiiidge more detail. I know I drew her with light-ish brown hair at the start but I'm thinking I'll make it darker > . No colors on this one yet! Might keep it as is because I'm afraid I'll ruin it ; w ;. You guys stay awesome!
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Post by Dashe on Mar 3, 2017 1:44:17 GMT -5
Reminds me of something out of a Miyazaki movie! Really, though, you should color it. You have a clean photo of the lineart now, so there's nothing to lose if you try. By not trying, in fact, you're going to be missing out on the opportunity to improve your coloring, and the more times you take that opportunity, the more confident you'll be with it.
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Post by Digouter on Mar 3, 2017 1:50:04 GMT -5
Hnnng... you're right . w .
I'll do my best! Right now I'll collect what colored pencils I have to see if I have enough to get the desired colors I want haha. Either way, I'll color it (but I'll try to be minimal...) XD
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Post by Digouter on Mar 3, 2017 4:54:13 GMT -5
Gosh haha. It feels like I can credit so much of what I do to Dashe because of how much I'm urged to keep improving! Here, though~ Even with the app there is some slight washed-out-ness-thing going on but... I'm still so happy with this! Thanks again Dashe x).
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Post by Dashe on Mar 3, 2017 11:14:20 GMT -5
You're welcome. I would've never guessed the Reaverbot eye was supposed to be green otherwise!
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Post by Digouter on Mar 6, 2017 12:29:17 GMT -5
Okay! Time to work on Chapter Two's designs (at least some of them). So, here's another character: This here is Ambrosia - the only daughter of an old, rich and powerful family of Diggers (the Sinclairs). Bear with me as I've been quite tired lately haha... I'm okay with how she turned out but I was barely thinking when I designed it. Just as well, I do best when it's spontaneous haha. As for the color of hair, it's just like her name! Amber x) You guys keep on being awesome!
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Post by Dashe on Mar 7, 2017 0:58:19 GMT -5
Is it bad that I'm more interested in her weapon than who she is as a person? Is she older or younger than Souf? And do the Sinclairs also have a baby who pilots mecha?
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Post by Digouter on Mar 7, 2017 1:04:35 GMT -5
Hehee, it definitely isn't bad. When I was working on the design, blank as it was my mind was on the weapons. "Something elegant", it would say. I tend to do it on the fly - heck, the pistol she's using now is modeled after Teisel's own pistol in your story (though it doesn't look alike). Amber isn't much older than Soof or Bran, no... she's a bit taller than him, very aristocratic I suppose. The Sinclairs might have had something like Bon Bonne at one point, but since the Digging days for the family have long passed, it's currently only Amber that's holding the torch. So she has an immense chip on her shoulder about the whole 'not enough female diggers' in Calvesram thing. The blade she's using is an old family heirloom in a way! Hahah, I can't help but say... because she thinks Bran is a guy she becomes super competitive, knowing that she could totally kick Bran's butt (I really love these situations haha). The License Exams are handled differently in Calvesram, though I'll leave that to the story! Hahaha, maybe it'll even be a Tron kind of anger/admiration for Bran at one point just to make things eeeven better > .
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Post by Digouter on Apr 18, 2017 7:14:50 GMT -5
Hey guys ... hahah, I know it's been a while but, I lost someone near and dear to me and it pretty much just... well, it kinda messed with my inspiration haha. Still, I want to show that the project isn't going anywhere, so I drew something up! Just my ol' pencil, and I think I'll stick with just that for a while haha. At least it gives it a little more character than the super clean ones I normally make I'm definitely alive, and I'm definitely getting to work on it... sorry though, for taking a while with this. ^^
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Post by Dashe on Apr 18, 2017 18:31:11 GMT -5
Oh, cool, it looks like boxart! Sorry you're dealing with stuff, and glad to see you back around!
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Post by Digouter on Apr 22, 2017 13:53:58 GMT -5
Thanks Dashe, I appreciate the feedback! It's been a rough time - still is haha. I got to sit down with a good buddy and discuss the story a little, flesh out the motivations and all, and I doodled some things! I'll just post it here haha. Bran's the exercise-y type, gotta stay strong because of them digs! On the other hand, my buddy asked me if Sue had a similar puroresu like shirt under her poncho - turns out: Pretty much yup. You guys keep staying awesome!
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