Four
Gorubeshu
"Who ate my crackerrrs..."
Posts: 236
|
Post by Four on Feb 24, 2007 20:29:59 GMT -5
You're mean x). Seriously though, we can't really have 'Sashi's storyline if we don't have his character so... *thumbs up* Your character's definitely better than I expected.
|
|
|
Post by Musashi on Feb 25, 2007 4:27:25 GMT -5
|
|
|
Post by Dash on Feb 25, 2007 12:55:33 GMT -5
Sorry man, I just couldn't help myself. xP
Congrats on your character being approved. ^^
|
|
Star General
Zakobon
The Party will never end, the Music will never stop, the Heartbeat will never fade.
Posts: 127
|
Post by Star General on Mar 8, 2007 0:39:29 GMT -5
you do realize my character's description was deleted along with the original topic.....
|
|
Star General
Zakobon
The Party will never end, the Music will never stop, the Heartbeat will never fade.
Posts: 127
|
Post by Star General on Mar 8, 2007 1:02:44 GMT -5
heres my orginal character.
Name: Andres StarGeneral Age:15 Height: 6'1 Weight: 168 lbs
Story: StarGeneral was born in Hyperion, a not too distant star system in a time far into the future. He was system commander of hyperion, and oversaw all military and political things there. During the last war of Hyperion, his ship was sucked into a time vortex which sent him back to legends times. His ship was to badly damaged to fly when he crash landed it on earth, so he sold the spare parts to buy diggin equipment, he found life on earth more fascinating than in the future, so he stayed.
Personality: StarGeneral is a good-humoured, guy you want to have around. He is cool and lethal with a sword, someting you would not be able to tell by his appeareance. The ability to use his sword and shield as ofensive weapons in conjunction confuses users of older sword arts. He is partial to rootbeer, he enjoys sampling many different kinds of soda, and has a great taste in food. He is prepare for most common situations undergorund, and has several days supplies of water and food to eat in case of getting trapped.
Weapons: Jade Sword: a sword forged of Jade with a deterium core, given to him by a system commander of hyperion, In rage mode, sword blade is made of light, and is weightless, stored in sheath on his back.
Star Shield: a small bracelet on his arm with the stargeneral symbol in the middle, uses advanced techonology to expand the star many times greater than it is on the bracelet, acts as a shield and weapon. Has retractable razors on points of star.
Armor: he wears concealed body armor made of the space metal Deterium covering his chest legs and arms under his trench coat and blue jeans. He also wears a brown broad rimmed hat. Deterium is light and extremelly hard materiel, used in the construction of space ships in the future, it can however break under some circumstances when exposed to certain elements.
He has a special peice of techonology he got in battle called a rage adaptor. during battle, the rage adaptor draws energy absorbed from the shield and transfers that energy into the shield carrier, creating a phisical state in which the user has increased senses, stenght and speed. A red aoura surrounds the user in this state. After 10 mins, rage burns out and must re-charge.
|
|
Four
Gorubeshu
"Who ate my crackerrrs..."
Posts: 236
|
Post by Four on Mar 11, 2007 10:59:47 GMT -5
Sorry Star. Nothing seems to be out of place, or anything... but I just don't see a fifteen year old overseeing 'politics' as well as military aspects of a government, be it far into the future or what not... I'd say this guy should be a little older. Dash might say otherwise though, so be on the lookout for his say on things.
|
|
|
Post by Dash on Mar 11, 2007 13:26:29 GMT -5
Yeah, no...I'm with Four. Uh...fix up the age, Star. lol
|
|
Star General
Zakobon
The Party will never end, the Music will never stop, the Heartbeat will never fade.
Posts: 127
|
Post by Star General on Mar 11, 2007 14:17:14 GMT -5
well, i cant make him much older, lets just say that when he went thorugh the vortex, it de-aged him from 20 or so...hows that sound... and well make him 16. I dont want to end up older than Rage.
|
|
|
Post by Rage on Mar 11, 2007 20:26:48 GMT -5
I can always change my character's age. It doesn't matter to me. I was lazy about it and just put my own age a year ago.
|
|
|
Post by Dash on Mar 12, 2007 16:31:50 GMT -5
well, i cant make him much older, lets just say that when he went thorugh the vortex, it de-aged him from 20 or so...hows that sound... and well make him 16. I dont want to end up older than Rage. Well, if you wouldn't to do that, then you'd have to assume that since his body isn't the same as from when he was in the future, some of his skills and abilities wouldn't be possible since his body is longer use to it. Also, I'm interested in knowing how future technology would be able to sustain itself in the Legends world...since things are obiviously different.
|
|
Star General
Zakobon
The Party will never end, the Music will never stop, the Heartbeat will never fade.
Posts: 127
|
Post by Star General on Mar 13, 2007 22:10:32 GMT -5
[/quote] Well, if you wouldn't to do that, then you'd have to assume that since his body isn't the same as from when he was in the future, some of his skills and abilities wouldn't be possible since his body is longer use to it.[/quote] I guess he wouldnt be his best at swordfighting anymore. That and the strength loss would result in the Star Shiled being veeerrry heavy when fully deployed, so hed have to be stationary unless he was in Rage Mode to use it. [/quote]Also, I'm interested in knowing how future technology would be able to sustain itself in the Legends world...since things are obiviously different.[/quote] well, the shield and armor themesleves are composed of synthetic materiel from a different worlds...The only real thing i'm concerned about is his shield... lets change it to what it orginally was, the bracelet is mechanichal, and not made of nano-technology, the star pops slightly out of the bracelet, spins and enlarges its main flat points, and then the points come out...yeah, that would work. As for the Rage adaptor, it should work regardless, another character from the legends world had something similar but was never used. The sword....well, being made of jade on the outside would not allow for hitting against metal unless it was extreemely sharp, and just sliced through. Instead of the whole blade being mostly Jade, we could go with it being coated with Jade or something, and then have that deterium underneath.
|
|
Four
Gorubeshu
"Who ate my crackerrrs..."
Posts: 236
|
Post by Four on Mar 14, 2007 2:25:36 GMT -5
All right. Well, whatever you do, try to make it seem plausible, and at least make a decent explanation to what you've just stated above in your character sheet all right ? We're not strict, but such a souped up character is just too out of this world (of course, we're allowing the time shift thing for some reason ^,^). We'll see what happens when you finish up the editted sheet. Put in your technical notes as well so you don't forget when you begin rp'ing.
|
|
Star General
Zakobon
The Party will never end, the Music will never stop, the Heartbeat will never fade.
Posts: 127
|
Post by Star General on Mar 14, 2007 18:34:25 GMT -5
heck, you guys have aproved characters MUCH more souped up than mine oh, and dety (deterium) isnt unbreakable, its just not a metal "from this world", its bascally Hyperion's rely hard steel
|
|
Four
Gorubeshu
"Who ate my crackerrrs..."
Posts: 236
|
Post by Four on Mar 16, 2007 11:30:55 GMT -5
Complaining about it isn't going to get your character approved. Besides, we've already accepted the edits you're going to make.
I only remember ever approving the Rage, Blues, and 'Sashi. I've studied all of them and decided they're fit to roleplay in both the Old Gods and High Stakes easily. Just like an online world, there must be limitations to what someone can do. They aren't souped up, but they aren't your average Joe either.
Just change his age and all those other things you said you'd fix, okay? Last warning now ^_^.
|
|
Star General
Zakobon
The Party will never end, the Music will never stop, the Heartbeat will never fade.
Posts: 127
|
Post by Star General on Mar 16, 2007 18:00:55 GMT -5
Alright, my edited character sheet. Please criticize, i will make further adjustments.
Name: Andres StarGeneral Age:16 (was 23 before time warp) Height: 6'1 Weight: 168 lbs
Story: StarGeneral was born in Hyperion, a not too distant star system in a time far into the future. He was system commander of hyperion, and oversaw all military and political things there. During the last war of Hyperion, his ship was sucked into a time vortex which sent him back to legends times. His ship was to badly damaged to fly so he crash landed it on earth, and when he crawled out of his destroyed spaceship, he realized after looking at a peice of glass that his body had de-aged almost 7 years! He went to a nearby town, and was horrified to learn that returning to the future would no longer be possible since the technology was so primitive. He tried to forget his past life, stop thinking about what the outcome of the war was and learn to live in the current time period, he found hope in the fact that if he could repair his ship, he could take to the stars once more, in hope of finding a similar vortex. Equipment: Stargeneral has a light set of armor for protection that he wears under his clothing like a body suit. It has been infused with Deterium metal, and can withstand 95% of attacks within the light-damage level, such as a hit from a zakobon or other small reaverbot. The cloth is flexible and allows for a large range of motion. If it cracks under a heavy class attack, it cannot be repaired with modern technology, the deterium must be extracted from the cloth at his ship and re-processed. As for other defense, he carries a very strange looking shield with him in the shape of a star. It is contained in a small bracelet on his right arm, and can be expanded to many different settings. It can withstand many heavy class attacks, and will most likely not break (unless the story dictates), if it is broken, he will need 50 minutes to an hour to work on it, and must have certain tools along with a sheild repair. The shield itself is very heavy when fully expanded, and cannot be carried, unless he is "Rage-ing" In terms of dress, he wears pretty much anything he wants, the body suit can fit under any clothing, he does frequently wear a "seargeant" style bucket hat with a star on it. On his sword (left) arm, he has a smaller wristwatch with a button on it, that is the rage adaptor, which uses stored energy from refractor shards, electricity, or light to create a super-state of being, the user is encircled in a red auora, his sword blade becomes light, and he is 40% stronger and faster than he is most of the time. The adaptor can be used by anyone with human DNA.
Personality: StarGeneral is a good-humoured guy , he is comfortable with life, even though he may seem to be the quiet guy in the group. He tries to blot out things he doesn't want to remeber, and it has a depressing effect on him sometimes. He is loyal and brave, and can be just as good a follower as he can a leader. He is a tad lazy, he enjoys rest and food most of all, and for his choice of drink: Rootbeer, he loves pop in general but this is his favorite kind, much more enjoyable than the dull synthetic water packs he used to drink all the time. He was very skilled with his sword, but the de-aging process robbed him of some of his strength, and he doesn't have the phisical discipline to execute some of his old moves, or carry his heavy shield when its all the way out. His salvaged his Rage Adaptor in the hopes of renewing those skills, but it didn't work.
|
|