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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 12:01:27 GMT -5
So... Hey there, my name's Typhon Purifier 89. Some of you may know me from Megaman Legends Universe, I've been on there for..... well forever..... I decided to write a fanfic recently, and I figured that I should post it here for you guys too, seeing as how there isn't a lot of crossing over between the two sites, and because more readers is always a good thing. I'd love it if you could read and review this. It's something 've been working on for a couple weeks now, and it's only gonna get better (Hopefully.... lol) I have to upload it by chapter, so forgive the double posting, cause MLS only allows one attachment per post... TP89 Attachments:
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 12:03:07 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Elysium's Legacy Attachments:
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 12:03:50 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Attachments:
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 12:04:28 GMT -5
Chapter 3 Attachments:
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 12:05:20 GMT -5
Chapter 4: The True Function and Purpose of Megaman Trigger Attachments:
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 12:06:02 GMT -5
Chapter 5 Attachments:
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 12:06:24 GMT -5
Chapter 6 More coming soon! Attachments:
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Post by Mikéy on Feb 16, 2011 12:44:27 GMT -5
Good to see you're willing to share your Magnum Opus with MMLS Typhon. I promise I'll get around to reading it, but there's quite a bit going on right now; both on the net and in real life.
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Post by Blues on Feb 16, 2011 15:11:54 GMT -5
Hey Typhon, welcome to MMLS! I've been following your 'fic every now and then, and it's great to see that it's getting more exposure. Good luck on future chapters!
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 16, 2011 17:04:18 GMT -5
Thanks guys. And actually, I have a question that perhaps you guys can answer. People are really liking the fic, and I've gotten pm's from people who say that it could literally be canon assuming zero and zx are ignored, which I've kinda been doing, cause they seem to just be offshoots of random endings that may or may not be canon in the x series line. Like, say, the zero series is based on an ending of x6 that wasn't followed later, as x7 and x8 had nothing to do with it, but was basically a way to make games that featured zero as the hero. I don't really count either as canon storyline, because basically the made up timelines that they attribute these series to to tie it in with canon is ridiculous, has tons of plot holes, and seems to be closer to x than battle net, but still some sort of parallel universe....
I'm asking if I shouldn't do that. I wonder for 2 reasons. The first is cause I know people like hose series to, but truth be told I feel like they are kind of Archie comics like and they focus on random fan crap. I don't know. I like thinking of it as the story of Megaman, not the story of zero. Plus, I'm not as familiar with those games, but I do wanna make a really cool cohesive storyline that includes them all....
I can try it obviously, but u think it would be.... Too nightmarish ? Lol
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Post by Dashe on Feb 17, 2011 2:35:30 GMT -5
Alright, so I read all of the chapters this evening. I have read a ton of these "Get Mega Man Down From Elysium" stories on the main site and elsewhere, and yours is easily among the top contenders on the theme. I commend you especially on your ability to write about the system and actually retain my interest, especially with the twist in Chapter 4. Normally I don't really care too much about that aspect of Legends and expect myself to like the Terra segments better.
I did like the Terra segments better, of course, especially your characterizations of Jim, Osh, Bensley, and Ira. Also liked that Teisel had a pretty big role in it and plenty of opportunities to shine. However, when Amelia appeared to congratulate Roll and Tron in Chapter 6, I found it odd that even though Ira was with them (she was with them, right?) Amelia made no mention of her whatsoever, even though Ira was from the island she'd been running for years! Same deal with the Kattelox reporter, I found the lack of KTOX pride a bit strange.
Sera also felt off to me. A bit too informal and chipper, even though she's been operating outside the System for three years. It almost seems like she's a different character.
I take it you're going the "Bon Bonne is a robot" route, since his vocabulary hasn't expanded at all in three years, or is he just mentally challenged? Oh, and I got a nice laugh out of that snippet about Mega Man acquiring the mystery item in his inventory, too. XD
I am completely unfamiliar with Zero and ZX, and have minimal knowledge of Classic and X, so I honestly can't help you with that. I don't recommend putting them in if you aren't as familiar with those games as you are with X, Classic, and Legends, though. Actually, I've got a theory that ZX only happened because in 2005 it was revealed that Keiji Inafune turned down Inticreates' proposal for Legends 3...I'd just stick with X, Classic and Legends since that's what you're most knowledgeable about.
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Post by Mikéy on Feb 21, 2011 11:26:26 GMT -5
To Typhon's suprise and my own, I've actually read the last 4 chapters in my 1st period class, thanks to a mixture of apathy and being caught and unable to escape; figuratively. I love all of the little references from the boards mixed into the story, really awesome. To be completely honest, I know nothing about Classic Megaman or X. I guess you could say I'm half-hoping the story may shine some light on that aspect... perhaps? *is suddenly reminded of Flash Strikes, Charged Tackles, and Blue Pin Missiles* I just wish I could actually see the reaverbots getting dead myself. And- at that point in time, I'm really glad I'm not Megaman. I'm not much of a suggestions person, but I really love what I see. and yeah, Dashe's review is pretty spot-on as well. But I don't mind Sera's character, the way I see it, now She actually fits in this pictureI just can't wait for the reunion. With writing like this, it's going to be the most beautiful thing I've seen story-wise in a long time.
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Post by Typhon Purifier 89 on Feb 22, 2011 15:40:31 GMT -5
Chapter 7 Part I!! Run!! Horrifying Reunion! Attachments:
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Post by Mikéy on Feb 22, 2011 17:46:18 GMT -5
Eh well, maybe things will get warmer on the rocket... which is currently being blocked by a giant walking brick with missiles.
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Post by Dashe on Feb 22, 2011 18:00:05 GMT -5
The reunion is filled with Reaverbots and explosions, huh? MUUUUUUUUUUUCH better than that sappy stuff I'm used to. I think I like Ira rounding out the group better than Aero, too. It's been a few months and I still haven't been able to get used to her. I think I've been desensitized. :06:
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