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Post by HF on Apr 7, 2015 11:59:49 GMT -5
It's not, but it may as well be, since she wasn't given a name. I like it. I'm making this her "always referred to as" nickname.
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Post by Dashe on Apr 7, 2015 12:20:10 GMT -5
I like it because there's a reporter named Mary Sunshine in Chicago! She's also usually cast as a man in drag and they pull her wig off at the end of the show. Which is giving me ideas I probably shouldn't be having.
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Post by HF on Apr 14, 2015 9:06:02 GMT -5
I like it because there's a reporter named Mary Sunshine in Chicago! [MESSAGE TRUNCATED] Which is giving me ideas I probably shouldn't be having. ...yeah... the less I think about this one the better. Just some literal page filler this week (so I can get Chapter 3 starting on the left side again). Reporter Sunshine's profile should be easy to get up in time for its start too, so I'll see if I can get something up by then as well...
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Post by Mikéy on Apr 14, 2015 9:30:30 GMT -5
She's getting a whole profile page dedicated to her complete with the name?
I feel like I indirectly yet awesomely contributed. Go me!
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Post by Dashe on Apr 14, 2015 10:13:33 GMT -5
My printer took one look at the amount of black in that filler and hung itself by the power cord.
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Post by Mikéy on Apr 14, 2015 11:26:34 GMT -5
I would invert it to see what it looks like then. I bet your printer would be far more willing after that. E: It looks natural enough!
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Post by HF on Apr 14, 2015 11:39:40 GMT -5
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Post by Mikéy on Apr 14, 2015 12:09:08 GMT -5
I keep flicking back and forth between the two, and the only difference that really really stands out is the logo. Yours has less ink usage, so it'd be even more printer friendly.
I'm probably one of the only people that would go back and forth between the images to notice any changes in the art itself but have the logo be so distracting that it's impossible to do so.
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Traingham
Cannam
Oooh. What's this?
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Post by Traingham on Apr 24, 2015 17:30:53 GMT -5
Traingham: YES. Just to keep things in perspective though, Rickert did do something that does downplay said GodHand member quite a bit. Mid-Update ContentsParody wallpaper time! All in 1080p (of course): White Logo, Black BG Red Logo, Black BG Black Logo, White BGIf anyone wants them in other resolutions, let me know! I know. I think I must have stared with eyes wide open and jaw hanging ajar for quite some time as my mind fought to recover. Now I fear that Rickert may meet an untimely and gruesome end...cause, Berserk. Wait, what happened? Why are my words...okay.
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Post by HF on Apr 28, 2015 7:34:51 GMT -5
Now I fear that Rickert may meet an untimely and gruesome end...cause, Berserk. Still a better fate than "Endless Boat Journey". Update: Now begins Chapter 3! I'm lacking behind in buffer pages because real life stuff, but either way I'll see if I can catch up (if not, suspense page!). Also as promised, Reporter "Sunshine" gets her character profile for being easy to write in quirks and other silly qualities. See if you know what I was doing there!
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Post by Dashe on Apr 28, 2015 9:28:18 GMT -5
It beings, huh? Fabulous! But I'd change "Despite shortage supplies from previous attacks" to "Despite a supply shortage from previous attacks" or "Despite a shortage in supplies from previous attacks" if that fits in the bubble. I'll be checking out Sunshine's profile later.
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Post by HF on Apr 28, 2015 9:38:01 GMT -5
Fabulous! But I'd change "Despite shortage supplies from previous attacks" to "Despite a supply shortage from previous attacks" or "Despite a shortage in supplies from previous attacks" if that fits in the bubble. And this happens when you miss a weekend of iScribble (WHERE WERE YOU, EDITOR!?). (I kid.) Thanks! I'll find some time to get it fixed in a bit. Edit: All done! How's it look? Cool. I look forward to your feedback as always!
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Post by Mikéy on Apr 28, 2015 12:48:25 GMT -5
The profile looks great to me! I'd change "childish part which comes with her energetic personality" to "childish trait that comes with her energetic personality" instead, "and acts on impulse much to her crew's chargin in keeping up with her constantly-changing pace" appears as if it needs to be reworded a little, since I don't understand the middle of it - perhaps Dashe has a suggestion for it. I'm personally drawing a blank. The semicolon after good job should be a period, since it looks more like the end of a sentence. That's what I got on 'er.
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Aiyumi
Gorubeshu
Brazilian Kobun
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Post by Aiyumi on May 4, 2015 8:48:36 GMT -5
Finished reading chapter 2! My mother likes your drawing of Tron, and the "special effects" when people are running. I think this chapter was a bit short, with much less text than the previous ones. It must be because it focuses more on fast-paced action and the characters can't waste much time talking XD. Like I'd heard someone say in an action scene from some anime, "Move your body rather than your mouth!" And I've found some typos on Reporter Sunshine's profile: "Known" is written twice here: "one of the more well-known known inhabitants of Kattelox Island." "Determation" should be "determination." "Chargin" should be "chagrin." This is all I can point out, because I'm not one of the experts. XD
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Post by Mikéy on May 4, 2015 10:07:18 GMT -5
I also noticed something: I found that I wasn't able to highlight text on a profile page to copypasta it. Is that a feature?
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