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Post by Rockman Striker on Aug 24, 2009 19:19:20 GMT -5
Only some days left! if you haven´t voted already do it now! i will appreciate it. You aren´t telling me wich colors do you like  Just Dragge and Green did it already. |
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Post by Rockman Striker on Aug 31, 2009 20:07:18 GMT -5
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Post by Dragge on Aug 31, 2009 21:11:16 GMT -5
Looks really amazing in color! I'm surprised no one else tried to submit any other color ideas. The shadowing seems well done too. Keep up the good work! ;D
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duo
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Post by duo on Sept 1, 2009 11:00:32 GMT -5
Wow, looks great, even though I liked the other version better  Could you color that one as well? Please?! Although the majority of it is flat shaded, your shadows and stuff look good. Some parts are missing color, like around the shoes. Also, your lines aren't smooth everywhere. You use a lot of basic shapes for the body, etc. If you know how to use inkscape, try vectorizing the drawing. Then let inkscape color everything for you. If you use bezier paths and standard shapes, the wrinkles in your lines will go away too. When you're done, export it as a .png, and you can use gimp to add more natural blending, light, or shading. |
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Post by snowman on Sept 1, 2009 13:26:29 GMT -5
This is really cool! You put great detail into it, and it's very balanced, both colour-wise and pose-wise. Keep it up!  |
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Qwertman
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Post by Qwertman on Sept 1, 2009 23:06:36 GMT -5
I like the servbot heads. Would not want to mess with her!
Critical: Hmm... Pretty good as is but soooomething seems off. What if you upped the contrast? That might look better! Or maybe it just needs a background. Yeah, that's probably what I was thinking.
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Post by duo on Sept 1, 2009 23:14:35 GMT -5
Oh, one more thing I didn't notice. Her eyes are over her goggles! They should be tinted orange with the rest of her face.
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Qwertman
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Post by Qwertman on Sept 1, 2009 23:19:47 GMT -5
Yeah, I noticed that. Now that I look at it some more forget what I said about the contrast, she just needs a background and you've got yourself a masterpiece.
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Post by Rockman Striker on Sept 2, 2009 18:05:42 GMT -5
I readed your opinions and i put some other details in the drawing. It´s not the googles are over the eyes, it´s just the transparency effect i put to it gives me strange tinted eyes, so at last i put the one that look better. Well since i didn´t have any other background image that fits Tron, i put the Gesselschaft! I changed the color and transparency effect of her googles, and now they look over her eyes, now the drawing has a background image (simple, but i think looks fine), and i added a shinning flash effect to the scythe´s blade. How it looks? i375.photobucket.com/albums/oo199/Rockman_Striker/colored2-Tron-Battle-Suit1-By-Rockm.jpg |
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snowman
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Post by snowman on Sept 2, 2009 19:03:50 GMT -5
Not bad, but the background's blurry, and has very different colours and a different style than your drawing. A very good idea, I personally like the setting, just needs a few changes. Maybe you could add some shadows in it?
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Post by Pitch on Sept 2, 2009 19:38:43 GMT -5
snowman, the background is taken from Misadventures of Tron Bonne. @___@ [ link] anyway, I meant to comment before about the goggles/eyes thing but since you've already taken care of that, I haven't got anything terribly constructive to say. I love it; it looks great. I'd lose the background, though. Tron looks like a giant in there. o__o |
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Post by Qwertman on Sept 2, 2009 22:43:04 GMT -5
Yeah, that background doesn't fit. But the flare does!
And the new goggle shading...
"Tron! What does the scanner say about his power level?"
"It's... OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAND!"
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Post by Rockman Striker on Sept 5, 2009 22:05:51 GMT -5
Thanks for your comments again, you know they make me draw more and of course learn from some of my mistakes ;D do you know how can i upload my works at the Legends Station site?
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