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Post by Dash on Feb 14, 2007 20:02:33 GMT -5
This thread will be used to determine the approval of any original (aka; fan-made) characters. As always, be sure that your original character is made for the Legends world. Unfortunately, this means that if you've had your character approved by FG, it's no longer valid. You'll have to re-submit any original characters you've made. If you're not sure your original character will make it, just read over some of the approved ones to get an idea of what's allowed. ^^
Character Submission Form-- Name: Your character's name. Age: Your character's age. Personality: Go in depth about your character's personality. Description: Your character's physical description, in words. If you include a picture, be sure to write out a description as well. Role playing is about writing, after all, not art skills. History: A bit about your character's past goes here. Please note that it is not required to be tragic. Other: Anything else you wish to say about your character, such as his/her occupation, weapons, pets, whatever.
----- This thread is for people to give their opinions on original character ideas. But ultimately, Four and I will have the final say. If you feel that one of us is not being fair, notify the other and we'll discuss it in private and come to a conclusion. And yes, you will be allowed to re-submit your character if you're declined. But hopefully, you'll have made some changes based on our reasons for declining you.
A list of approved charater descriptions will be listed under the respective users name in the second post.
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Post by Dash on Feb 14, 2007 20:03:28 GMT -5
Approved Original Characters:
Blues: Axel Vin-Martin
Rage: Rage
Musashi: Hal Ganian
Dashe: Lin Falaris Den Falaris
Star General: Andres StarGeneral
Goopygoo: Erika Bonaparte
Malt: Alvert E. Fulcrum
Overlord Zetta: Leon Killamara
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Post by Rage on Feb 15, 2007 16:57:00 GMT -5
*Looks around* Why isn't anybody here? RAGE ANGERY...RAGE SMASH* I am Anna's baby Daddy. Here is my fan character..I know there is something wrong with it. So please tell The Rage.
Name: Rage Age: 16 Gender: Male Weaponry: He always has his dagger and plasma pistol by his side. His saber power, length, and weight can be adjusted with sword parts he buys from the junkshops or he finds in the ruins. His plasma pistol can also be modified with buster parts with attack, energy, range and rapid.
History:
He has no idea where he came from. When he was a baby, he was abandon from his parents and left in an old broken old house in Yass Plains, Kattolox until Colonial Volnutt found him. When he was 10, The Colonial started teaching Rage military techniques, formations, attacks, defense, hand to hand combat, sneaking skills, infantry, and survival skills. After a couple years of perfecting his skills, Rage wanted to become a digger so he can find the legendary mother lode. He wanted the power, to control history if he found the mother lode. The world would never be the same with Rage in power. Rage’s Military would conquer these air pirates and bring all illegal activities down to zero. So the world can finally be at peace with each other. While he was still living in Kattelox, they were attacked by air pirates called the Bonnes. The pirates stole all his equipment for their machines. He wanted to something but he couldn’t thanks to those dang pirates. The Colonial and Rage were trapped in Uptown while everybody was flipping out; they would go out on the lake and fish. They were going to have some fun while this happening. After they were done, they were attacked by this little lego people in ships. The blast destroyed the ship and nearly killing the Colonial. Rage had to swim the Colonial and himself back to shore. After Rage finally reached the shore, he rushed the colonial to the emergency room. While Colonial in emergency room, Rage become enraged by the air pirates and how they didn’t care about anybody they hurt and kept on going to do what they do. For the next 3 years Rage perfected his skills with the Colonial as his guide. When Rage turned 15, he left Kattolox Island in search for the mother lode and air pirates. Colonial Volnutt stayed in Kattolox to live the rest of his years.
Personality: When Rage isn’t in any combat situation, he always messing with and betting people he can do something stupid but people seem to get angry after everthing he does, even though he intended something to be joke. When he’s in combat, Rage turns into sick, sadistic crazy @ss Marine. Basically everything he wants dead, dies. He is a gentleman and will never hit women, no matter what they did. Just give him booze will his fighting because you in a drunkin’ manner.
Weakness: Women and alcohol
Appearance: He’s 5 foot 8 inches. He has a blond crew cut. He has a long face and somewhat muscular built. He has blues eyes. He’s has a tanish white skin-tone.
Armor: He’s wear camouflage pants with black leg armor with jump springs and wears a black chest armor similar to Mega mans and a camouflage shirt. He also wears gloves cut off at the knuckles. They don’t do anything he just likes them. Along with a black helmet that comes out of the back for when he’s in combat.
Armor stats: His armor can stand up to 50% percent of attacks he takes. It can break if it gets hit hard enough. Then he has to repair it and that takes about 5 minutes with shield repair, Longer if he doesn’t have a shield repair with him.
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Post by Dash on Feb 15, 2007 17:39:22 GMT -5
Bah, I gotta go. -_-
Rage, Four will let you know what's up.
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Four
Gorubeshu
"Who ate my crackerrrs..."
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Post by Four on Feb 18, 2007 0:36:14 GMT -5
Well... uhm... it's an interesting character, I'll give you that.
If the Bonnes had stolen all of their equipment and so cruelly blew up his fishing ship, how does Rage still have access to all kinds of military vehicles and weaponry? I can accept the pistol and dagger (gives your character that military touch), though.
I like the effort--it's obvious that you gave him a lot of thought. I'm not sure how you're going to pull off his homicidal, sadistic side in battle... his personality seems a bit over the top for a sixteen year old, but it seems plausible enough.
And well, I see a lot of things that could go wrong during roleplay when you're using this character... but, it's mostly overshadowed by the aspects done right in this sheet, so what the hey. It's okay for a first try.
Edit: But unfortunately, I'm not even sure if I'm allowed to approve it by myself. I'll get back to you on this, okay?
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Post by Blues on Feb 19, 2007 14:36:40 GMT -5
Well, here goes:
Name: Axel Vin-Martin
Age: 18
Personality: A little weird. Somewhat serious, somewhat goofy, it depends on his mood. Likes hot places, such as Saul Kada Island.
Description: Male. Mostly wears an updated version of Vile's green armor from MMX8, except that it's hollowed out, and the paint on the armor is faded. Otherwise, he has black hair, green eyes, his ears aren't big, and he wears a serious expression on his face (most of the time). When in his armor, he looks at a screen in his helmet, which shows outside, in front of him. He's physically fit.
History: Lived on Yosyonke. Left home at 18. Went to work at the new mines outside the city, and, while working there, discovered an insidious plot by the owner of the mines, Jade Sashade. She had planned to use the ancient technology dug up and repaired by the miners to take over the world. However, he found out about the plan, and set off with a few specially selected miners to stop Jade Sashade's plot, which they did successfully. Then, the mines started self-destructing. Both Axel and Jade had been stuck in the Repaired Ancient Machines room while the other miners had escaped. Both of them called a temporary truce and took armor with jetpacks to escape. Now, while Jade had installed a new jetpack on her purple armor before, Axel had taken an old suit with an old jetpack, and so she escaped while his failed halfway into the sky. He then conveniently landed on a uncontrollable hovering mining cart with some food on it. It continued to hover over the ocean, until Axel saw an island in the distance...
Other: Equipment: Axel's armor can withstand a mild barrage of plasma shots, fire, or physical blows. However, if his armor is hit too many times, it cracks, and is thus somewhat useless. If it cracks, he would need to find someone who could repair it. Axel's armor is light, so it allows him to run, jump, fly, etc. Axel has several weapons on the armor, most of which need to be repaired before he can use them. The only weapon that is working is his buster cannon that he received in the mines to fend off reaverbots. It can be upgraded. The equipment that need to be repaired are as follows: a shoulder-mounted cannon, two scout probes with plasma pistols, a jetpack, and a hacking probe. The shoulder cannon fires high-powered plasma shots, but only fires 3 out of 5 times he uses it. It has power equal to that of a fully-charged X-buster shot. He uses his sphere-ish shaped scout probes to scout out a corner if he is suspicious that there is something there. They have low-powered plasma pistols for their defense. The plasma pistols on the scout probes are equal to that of Megaman's Buster shots in the beginning of MML1. The probes are small, can hover, and can fit into a niche in the jetpack. The hacking probe is slightly bigger than the scout probes, fits into its own niche, can also hover, and can hack into a computer system if it isn't too complex. Unlike the scout probes, the hacking probe has no defenses. All three probes were added in by the miners. The jetpack, after it is repaired, always works, and can make a person float a maximum of 30 ft. off the ground. A item storage space was added to the jetpack, along with the probe niches. Axel is a fine mechanic, and can repair some machines, such as his probes. It takes Axel 30 minutes to an hour to fix one of his probes.
My character history is intentionally un-serious (is that a word?). I feel that it's a necessary contrast for darker/more tragic histories.
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Gorubeshu
"Who ate my crackerrrs..."
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Post by Four on Feb 20, 2007 7:52:25 GMT -5
A good example of a character that isn't necessarily that important, yet has a mildly interesting history. I'm looking forward to seeing this one in action.
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Post by Musashi on Feb 22, 2007 1:05:47 GMT -5
Name: Alan Ganian Age: 23 Personality: Sarcastic, Narcissistic, Easily Annoyed. Description: Male. He is of average height, a little on the tall side and is slim. He has a semi-dark complexion. He is a researcher for the Archaeological Research Base of Aqauran(ARBA). He is also an intermediate digger, which he use to do as a way to pay education costs and rent. History: Childhood-Raised in a run down neighborhood in southern Aqauran, he became very independent at a young age. He has no siblings. Adulthood-He left his home at 16 and started to dig so that he could go to college. After getting enough to go to a famous university, where he majored in archeology. At first he combined digging with research, but later just decided to just be an researcher. But after finding a certain item, he found himself in something huge. He went back to digging to aid research on this item and to prevent it from getting into the wrong hands(will elaborate more on this when I get a certain RP up[if it gets approved].). Equipment: He wears a short brown jacket (on which is the logo for ARBA), and a skintight undershirt. His pants are just plain jeans. He also wears glasses. When digging, he rides in a mech designed by himself, named Unterirdischer Mörder. Here's a picture of it(Crappily done, I know): i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/Musashi999/UnterirdischerMrderDesign.jpg(The design will probably change, and I'll also add different versions of the mech) EDIT::CHANGED HIS NAME!
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Post by Dash on Feb 22, 2007 16:30:46 GMT -5
*Looks around* Why isn't anybody here? RAGE ANGERY...RAGE SMASH* I am Anna's baby Daddy. Here is my fan character..I know there is something wrong with it. So please tell The Rage. Name: Rage Age: 16 Gender: Male Weaponry: He always has his dagger and plasma pistol by his side. His saber power, length, and weight can be adjusted with sword parts he buys from the junkshops or he finds in the ruins. His plasma pistol can also be modified with buster parts with attack, energy, range and rapid. History: He has no idea where he came from. When he was a baby, he was abandon from his parents and left in an old broken old house in Yass Plains, Kattolox until Colonial Volnutt found him. When he was 10, The Colonial started teaching Rage military techniques, formations, attacks, defense, hand to hand combat, sneaking skills, infantry, and survival skills. After a couple years of perfecting his skills, Rage wanted to become a digger so he can find the legendary mother lode. He wanted the power, to control history if he found the mother lode. The world would never be the same with Rage in power. Rage’s Military would conquer these air pirates and bring all illegal activities down to zero. So the world can finally be at peace with each other. While he was still living in Kattelox, they were attacked by air pirates called the Bonnes. The pirates stole all his equipment for their machines. He wanted to something but he couldn’t thanks to those dang pirates. The Colonial and Rage were trapped in Uptown while everybody was flipping out; they would go out on the lake and fish. They were going to have some fun while this happening. After they were done, they were attacked by this little lego people in ships. The blast destroyed the ship and nearly killing the Colonial. Rage had to swim the Colonial and himself back to shore. After Rage finally reached the shore, he rushed the colonial to the emergency room. While Colonial in emergency room, Rage become enraged by the air pirates and how they didn’t care about anybody they hurt and kept on going to do what they do. For the next 3 years Rage perfected his skills with the Colonial as his guide. When Rage turned 15, he left Kattolox Island in search for the mother lode and air pirates. Colonial Volnutt stayed in Kattolox to live the rest of his years. Personality: When Rage isn’t in any combat situation, he always messing with and betting people he can do something stupid but people seem to get angry after everthing he does, even though he intended something to be joke. When he’s in combat, Rage turns into sick, sadistic crazy @ss Marine. Basically everything he wants dead, dies. He is a gentleman and will never hit women, no matter what they did. Just give him booze will his fighting because you in a drunkin’ manner. Weakness: Women and alcohol (O.o) Appearance: He’s 5 foot 8 inches. He has a blond crew cut. He has a long face and somewhat muscular built. He has blues eyes. He’s has a tanish white skin-tone. Armor: He’s wear camouflage pants with black leg armor with jump springs and wears a black chest armor similar to Mega mans and a camouflage shirt. He also wears gloves cut off at the knuckles. They don’t do anything he just likes them. Along with a black helmet that comes out of the back for when he’s in combat. Armor stats: His armor can stand up to 50% percent of attacks he takes. It can break if it gets hit hard enough. Then he has to repair it and that takes about 5 minutes with shield repair, Longer if he doesn’t have a shield repair with him. Well, hmm...yeah. Tone him down just a bit. He's 16, right? He seems way too "I'm American, I Kill For My Country" like. Plus, his weakness is Alcohol and Women? To be honest, what kind of 16 year old in the Legends world could get women and alcohol enough to be his weakness? All I can say is go back over him and tone it down a bit. ^^; Name: Hal Ganian Age: 23 Personality: Sarcastic, Narcissistic, Easily Annoyed. Description: Male. He is of average height, a little on the tall side and is slim. He has a semi-dark complexion. He is a researcher for the Archaeological Research Base of Aqauran(ARBA). He is also an intermediate digger, which he use to do as a way to pay education costs and rent. History: Childhood-Raised in a run down neighborhood in southern Aqauran, he became very independent at a young age. He has no siblings. Adulthood-He left his home at 16 and started to dig so that he could go to college. After getting enough to go to a famous university, where he majored in archeology. At first he combined digging with research, but later just decided to just be an researcher. But after finding a certain item, he found himself in something huge. He went back to digging to aid research on this item and to prevent it from getting into the wrong hands(will elaborate more on this when I get a certain RP up[if it gets approved].). Equipment: He wears a short brown jacket (on which is the logo for ARBA), and a skintight undershirt. His pants are just plain jeans. He also wears glasses. When digging, he rides in a mech designed by himself, named Unterirdischer Mörder. (MORE LATER--Need to go) Hm, not bad, really. Of course, you should finish writing out his information when you get the chance, but I'm interested in seeing this character in your RP...just to see how he develops. Other than that, you've got my thumbs-up. Four? What's your opinion?
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Post by Rage on Feb 22, 2007 17:12:13 GMT -5
I'll do that A.S.A.P. I don't what I was thinking when I made this guy. I know "I'm American...FUDGE YEA!" I have used this character before in an legends Rp and I noticed that I never use the whole crazy person. I'll tone it done and fix it later.
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Post by Dash on Feb 22, 2007 17:24:03 GMT -5
Good Boy. *Pats him on the head.*
xDDD
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Post by Rage on Feb 22, 2007 18:21:51 GMT -5
Ojection!Sorry I had to do it. I think I have gotten rid of everything you didn't like about it. If I didn't I can always make up another character. Name: Rage Age: 16 Gender: Male Weaponry: He always has his dagger and plasma pistol by his side. His saber power, length, and weight can be adjusted with sword parts he buys from the junkshops or he finds in the ruins. His plasma pistol can also be modified with buster parts with attack, energy, range and rapid. History: He has no idea where he came from. When he was a baby, he was abandon from his parents and left in an old broken old house in Yass Plains, Kattolox until Colonial Volnutt found him. When he was 10, The Colonial started teaching Rage military techniques, formations, attacks, defense, hand to hand combat, sneaking skills, infantry, and survival skills. After a couple years of perfecting his skills, Rage wanted to become a digger so he can find the legendary mother lode. He wanted the power, to control history if he found the mother lode. The world would never be the same with Rage in power. Rage’s Military would conquer these air pirates and bring all illegal activities down to zero. So the world can finally be at peace with each other. While he was still living in Kattelox, they were attacked by air pirates called the Bonnes. The pirates stole all his equipment for their machines. He wanted to something but he couldn’t thanks to those dang pirates. The Colonial and Rage were trapped in Uptown while everybody was flipping out; they would go out on the lake and fish. They were going to have some fun while this happening. After they were done, they were attacked by this little lego people in ships. The blast destroyed the ship and nearly killing the Colonial. Rage had to swim the Colonial and himself back to shore. After Rage finally reached the shore, he rushed the colonial to the emergency room. While Colonial in emergency room, Rage become enraged by the air pirates and how they didn’t care about anybody they hurt and kept on going to do what they do. For the next 3 years Rage perfected his skills with the Colonial as his guide. When Rage turned 15, he left Kattolox Island in search for the mother lode and air pirates. Colonial Volnutt stayed in Kattolox to live the rest of his years. Personality: Rage is always messing with people and bett people he can do something stupid but people seem to get angry after everything he does, even though he intended something to be joke. Appearance: He’s 5 foot 8 inches. He has a blond crew cut. He has a long face and somewhat muscular built. He has blues eyes. He’s has a tanish white skin-tone. Armor: He’s wear camouflage pants with black leg armor with jump springs and wears a black chest armor similar to Mega mans and a camouflage shirt. He also wears gloves cut off at the knuckles. They don’t do anything he just likes them. Along with a black helmet that comes out of the back for when he’s in combat. Armor stats: His armor can stand up to 50% percent of attacks he takes. It can break if it gets hit hard enough. Then he has to repair it and that takes about 5 minutes with shield repair, Longer if he doesn’t have a shield repair with him.
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Post by Dash on Feb 22, 2007 18:57:24 GMT -5
Loads better. I'm giving you my thumbs-up. Just gotta wait on what Four thinks. :3
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Gorubeshu
"Who ate my crackerrrs..."
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Post by Four on Feb 23, 2007 20:27:23 GMT -5
The Rage is gooder. *thumbs up*
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Post by Dash on Feb 24, 2007 12:57:27 GMT -5
Name: Hal Ganian Age: 23 Personality: Sarcastic, Narcissistic, Easily Annoyed. Description: Male. He is of average height, a little on the tall side and is slim. He has a semi-dark complexion. He is a researcher for the Archaeological Research Base of Aqauran(ARBA). He is also an intermediate digger, which he use to do as a way to pay education costs and rent. History: Childhood-Raised in a run down neighborhood in southern Aqauran, he became very independent at a young age. He has no siblings. Adulthood-He left his home at 16 and started to dig so that he could go to college. After getting enough to go to a famous university, where he majored in archeology. At first he combined digging with research, but later just decided to just be an researcher. But after finding a certain item, he found himself in something huge. He went back to digging to aid research on this item and to prevent it from getting into the wrong hands(will elaborate more on this when I get a certain RP up[if it gets approved].). Equipment: He wears a short brown jacket (on which is the logo for ARBA), and a skintight undershirt. His pants are just plain jeans. He also wears glasses. When digging, he rides in a mech designed by himself, named Unterirdischer Mörder. Here's a picture of it(Crappily done, I know): i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/Musashi999/UnterirdischerMrderDesign.jpg(The design will probably change, and I'll also add different versions of the mech) *Holds back from laughing.* Uh, nice drawing, Musashi... xDDDDD Anyways, I say he's good to go. Four?
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